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Reviews for An Unwanted Marriage, But An Unexpected Love

By : jaymclg
  • From Heidi191976 on August 18, 2008
    Very romantic. I am glad that Hermione initiated the kiss. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From Sampdoria on August 18, 2008
    Finally, a kiss:-)) They are not rushing things are they? Just kidding, since it is an arranged marriage they probably should take more time than most to get to know eachother, they have to get over a "I don't want to" period most couples dont have to.
    Again a very nice chapter, I look forward to read more!!
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 17, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From Sampdoria on August 17, 2008
    Great updates, I really like your story!
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 15, 2008
    Another great chapter. I am glad that Sara-Jane's mother is finally accepting that her daughter has to marry Sirius. I look forward to reading the next one.
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  • From KellyJCR on August 12, 2008
    I really am enjoying this. The showdown between Snape, Hermione , Black and Delaney was classic. Can't wait for more. Well Done!
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 12, 2008
    Excellent. I can't wait to read more. I look forward to seeing who Severus ends up with or if he will be exiled. I am glad that Sirius has gotten a great young lady to marry.
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 08, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
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  • From KellyJCR on August 08, 2008
    I was so pleased to see a second update so soon. I love the way you write dialogue it gives the existing relationships a real depth. The fact that you turned Blaise into a girl to avoid the dark mark was very creative. Also the fact that Ron is in a relationship with her is even better. Great job can't wait for more.
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 08, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more to see how Severus and Rupert take the news that she has chosen Barty.
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  • From ANON - Sampdoria on August 08, 2008
    Thank you for the update. I like your story, it is good to read something humourous, romantic and easygoing, not to mention that you are kind enough to let Sirius being alive:-))
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  • From KellyJCR on August 07, 2008
    I really like it so far. I wasn't going to read it because I could not get past the Barty from the books, but you did explain it away well. I like that you added that he was part of the original marauders. Anyway well done and I am looking forward to an update.
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 07, 2008
    Another great chapter. I think that Hermione will definately choose Barty over any of the others. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From on August 07, 2008
    I know Ive read this one before but it was not completed I like it and hope to read more thanks
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 05, 2008
    This is an incredible story. I look forward to reading more. I am glad that you have chosen this couple. I hope that Barty does agree to marry Hermione.
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