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Reviews for Coloured Grey

By : IncessantDarkness29
  • From ANON - Cupid's lover on August 21, 2013
    Next chappy please:)
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 26, 2009
    Poor Draco!!! Soooo need chapter 5!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 05, 2009
    Wow! I soooo need chapter 4!
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  • From Rosei on April 05, 2009
    SICK!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!

    MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Thanks!
    R
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  • From Dezra on April 04, 2009
    Your story is very good. I don't understand why the boys don't ask for help outside of Grimmauld. Lupid stopped coming by it seems, what about Ron's family? Snape? Isn't there someone out there that could help heal Malfoy?
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  • From ANON - Tree on April 04, 2009
    I like it. Your writing style is interesting to my brain. I hope you continue this story.
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  • From callistianstar on September 26, 2008
    :) Well I'm glad my reviews got me a new chapter. lol But seriously, I'm glad you continued this. Yes, I definitely saw the more "storylike" quality of this chapter, and I felt a bit of a lost of imagery after the first section of this chapter (excepting the end bit) with all of the antagonistic dialogue, but you definitely have me intrigued. My questions really still stay the same, and even are being accumulated, so I look forward to the next chapter and why the Order isn't working together with Harry...assuming that they are alive. Now that I think of it, I'm wondering about what kind of character dynamic you'll be approaching if this relationship turns at all sexual. You usually seem to prefer a confidant bottom, Draco, and a rather aggressive top, Harry. Last thing, Do you intend to continue Dreamscape? Great job with this chapter.
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  • From ANON - char_marcus on September 26, 2008
    this is GOOD start to what could be a great story i love a vulnerable malfoy *sigh* keep it up and please update soon
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 26, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 3!!!
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  • From callistianstar on September 17, 2008
    Interesting. This sort of style is very raw, and I'm interested in where you'll take this. Is Hermione alive and well? Are there deeper explanations as to why Ron is being a prick? Nice job so far. :)
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 29, 2008
    Thank goodness Harry couldn't leave him out there!
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  • From aliceavis on August 11, 2008
    I really enjoyed this first chapter. An interesting choice of writing style. It's disjointed but I like it, I'm not sure why. It's like a bunch of little pieces stuck together. But you pull it off with out making it confusing/hard to follow. I liked your imagery and dramatic focus on colors.

    I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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