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By : Vegico
  • From BadgerUnforgiven on June 12, 2011
    I like it. Update soon?
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  • From ANON - Zaffar on February 05, 2010
    Hey you asked if anyone had any ideas for upcoming chapters,
    Having lily come back and be with harry would be good
    And I really don't like ron as a character or with hermione

    Anyway these are my opinions
    Good job otherwise and look forward to future chapters
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  • From ANON - A Reviewer on February 03, 2010
    Tags indicating you're working your way to slash and femdom would have been nice. Neither of them are things I'm terribly fond of, and had I known what was coming I'd have skipped reading. Instead, surprise slash. Do not want.
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  • From ANON - Khalif Foster on June 24, 2009
    Hi, good story. I want to be sure you put "puckered hole", so that means Harry went to have sex in Hermione's Butt. But two cum together and the juice mixed together at once. So, not sure what ya mean in story?? I read at first and thought two cock in vagina. Anyway, don't have to go to author page, there is nothing. But can go to Forums and in Challenge story, you can see my author name 'Mellow03'. For foursomes story. Harry/Hermione/Ron/Ginny. If write about it, hope can pick dirty story. If there is going to be anal sex, and afterward to suck cock or lick from anal or fingering and sucking it. Can ya write exactly the same as what they do as the readers to know exactly?? Example for rimming, if only rimming but no explain as how it taste or anything, they might not care that it is dirty or clean or no explain about other person that is getting rimmed is clean or not.
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  • From ANON - thyrokio on June 14, 2009
    good work
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  • From ANON - thyrokio on June 14, 2009
    Good work
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  • From Elphaba on June 10, 2009
    Well that's interesting
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  • From Elphaba on June 10, 2009
    Well that's hot and not good! LOL
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  • From Elphaba on June 10, 2009
    holy hell that was good!
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  • From Elphaba on June 10, 2009
    Well that was interesting!
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  • From KaelHyun on June 10, 2009
    I realy hope you have Hermione stay with Harry (R/Hr just dosent make sence and JKR obviously did it to piss off the H/Hr fans
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  • From Mellow03 on May 13, 2009
    Hi, good story, can ya include dirty blow job or anal-blow job after in anal and sucking cum and rimming from anal. Can be little dirty or anything, well, just dirty in anal, but nothing on butt, but little or nothing. But you decide. Would be kinky to have dirty blow job, that have minor scat, not thick scat, but minor or if bigger if you want. Good stuff on the blood in sex. I have a story about Ginny/Hermione/Ron/Harry as foursome as a story or one shot story, but that is dirty. Well, you can check it out at my profile as my author name is 'Mellow03'. Ya haven't write the another story in this website in a while.
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  • From thmanwithnoname on February 02, 2009
    glad to see you're back to writing.
    I look forward to more, both of this, and hopefully, stories beyond this one.
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  • From on January 20, 2009
    A bit short, you could have added it to the last chapter... I hope to see Lily soon and Harry Doming over Tonks.
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  • From on January 17, 2009
    Hot chapter mate, PLEASE update soon, as I would like to see what you have planned next.
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