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Reviews for Whom the Gods Would Destroy...

By : moirasfate
  • From ANON - Meeshs Wand on January 05, 2016
    Wow. I read the whole thing before reviewing. Very much a twist between the Harry Potter world and I AM LEGEND. I was glued to your story. I will definitely keep tabs on you for any future stories. Thank you so much for sharing.
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  • From ANON - EStrunk on June 06, 2013
    Absolutely fantastic story! I love your gradual development of the relationship between Charlie and Hermione. The plot was absolutely riveting. I read this despite the fact that I'm not into zombie stories, but it turned out to be much more than that. I don't want to put any spoilers in - but I love that you went to the scariest part of the Harry Potter series and gave it backstory and even more depth. I also really appreciate that you tied all of your original magical ideas back into existing legends and myths. That made it feeling very JKR. I got shivers at the end when Charlie's name was on the scroll! Thanks so much for a great read.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2012
    That was really fucking good. Like holy shit. Definitely one of the best fanfics I have read in a good long while.
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  • From Recordkeeper on January 01, 2011
    this was a really great really amazing story. I couldnt stop reading it for anything. very well written. the plot was excellent. I loved that the end didnt have a sugar sweet ending. they new more war would be coming eventually. and they knew to prepare for it. very well done.
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  • From Attitudinal on August 07, 2010
    This was beautifully written. I was wary of it at first, and I've seen it a few times. Once I actually finished reading it, I loved it. I only got confused a few times, with the Harry / Charlie battle. Other than that minor confusion, I loved it. This was an amazing read, and I'm honestly surprised there aren't more than 40 reviews.

    5/5 stars. :)
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  • From WesleyY7 on July 08, 2009
    I was going to wait until the end of the story to post a review, but chapter 13 was so incredible (and exactly halfway through the story) I thought I would make a few comments.

    *The set up for this story is amazing. The creepy, end of the world feel gives me the chills. One of my favorite books is "The Stand" by Stephen King, and the first few chapters remind me of that. The Inferi brings forth images from "I Am Legend" which is a good thing. I love the mystery and how every time we get an answer for one thing, another question must be asked.

    *Charlie Weasley - Wow. He is amazing. I absolutely adore him in this. The protector and loyal dragon keeper emerging as a leader and a deserving partner to our heroine. I think Hermione is a little too hard in this. I know she's going through a lot, but she seemed to have closed herself off the past 10 years. It's believable that she could isolate herself from her friends, but it makes me sad.

    *The Malfoys - Lucius: creepy and yet something more is happening; Draco - awesome and sad to see go; Astoria - I like what I've seen so far. And poor Scorpius.

    *Chapter 13 - I had to stop myself from scrolling down to the end because I was on pins and needles. I knew something was going to happen. The hospital scene was dark and creepy. Thank you for not describing what they saw through the nursery window. Although my imagination probably invisioned something worse. It was so suspenseful, and then then nothing happened, so I relaxed. And bam, magic sucking field arrives! Poor Theo. And I like how the group of ten has people from all four houses.


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  • From crysta656 on March 09, 2009
    Such a wonderful story!
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  • From margaritama on January 20, 2009
    I read the whole thing in one sitting and once again I am blown away by your writing. The depth, emotion, kaleidscope of passion, flesh out characterizations/development just BLOW ME AWAY.

    Your talent is just undescribable. I absolutely LOVED Out of the Silent Planet and then I find this treasure. There are no words. Thank you for creating and giving us something so moving, beautifully tragic that depicts our human fraility, fears and flaws. I was riveted.
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  • From elspeth on January 12, 2009
    There is no review I could give that would do justice at how I feel at this moment now that I have finished reading what I could only describe as an epic. This felt so well thought out and amazingly ingenious. The way your portrayed the characters of the HP universe were so captivatingly and at the same time heart wrenchingly REAL. This is by far the most original and thought out HP fanfiction I have ever read. It is few and far between when I can say that an author is of publishing calibre, but this proves that you could definitely do so. Thank you for one of the most enjoyable reads I have had in a long time.
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  • From Lyndie578 on December 15, 2008
    Such a heart-felt and melancoly ending. They finally beat Voldemort and a price they did pay. Charlie Weasley as the hero is the most wonderful turn of this story. And I'm ever so glad they survived, even if they've not been able to move on. Excellent story!
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  • From oliversangel on November 21, 2008
    *sits and takes a deep breath trying to get coherent thought to come about* I am going to do my best to leave a review that will do this story justice, but I doubt that I can. Firstly, this is THE most original HP fic I have ever come across on here. I felt as though I were reading book 8. This was a very well thought out, well planned, well researched story, that managed to be canon, and completely new at the same time. I have never seen anyone else use any of the ideas that you have for a sequel. The flayed baby, that was brilliant. You are, and I say this with absolute conviction, a genius. If you do have have anything else published, (it's a shame sometimes that fan fic can't be published. There was a sequel to Gone With the Wind published, I don't know how that was managed, but I see JK Rowling as being a litigeous sort of person) you need to publish. The amount of research, and planning that you did for this story makes my head spin. I think I would compare the scale of it to LOTR. I don't know how I came across this story, but I am so glad that I did. I have never encountered another one like it on here. I am happy to see you have lots of other stories to read, and I am planning on reading them all, and reviewing them all. I am quite excited actually. I loved seeing Hermione as a cross between Sarah Connor(Terminator 2)/Alice (From Resident Evil 2) I loved that Harry wasn't the hero for once, I have nothing against Harry, but he is always the hero, let someone else be it for a change, though I am sure he was relieved for once that the wizarding world wanted nothing to do with him. I just finished last night, I tried to read it in one go, but it ended up eing three gos, I have a very active 18 month old that always wants to climb in my lap. I don't know why the counter for this story isn't higher, it should be. I am going to reccomend it on my page, and your work in general. I am confident that the rest of your work will be just as wonderful. I got lost in the details of it all, and it really felt like I was there. Thank you for taking the time to plan out, and write that story for us. I know we write for the readers, and sometimes the readers don't let us know how much they enjoy the story, too lazy to take 5 minutes, and let us know. So thank you, for being brilliant!! I am off to read the treasure trove of stories I have stumbled upon!!! XXOO
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  • From chickaboo on November 13, 2008
    This is by far one of the most amazing stories I've read. I loved every second of this and I just wanted to say thank you so much for sharing it! I hope to read more of your work soon!
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  • From andarte on November 12, 2008
    Absolutely beautiful!
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  • From chickaboo on October 30, 2008
    Wow. I can totally see how the fact that it's all over would just feel surreal and "foggy". Like a dream. Great updates as always. I can't wait for more!!
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on October 20, 2008
    Ooooooohhhh maaaaan this fic has got me riveted to my chair! I so cannot wait to see how this story finishes. I have a feeling it'll be huge!

    Well done for such an ace work!
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