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By : andarte
  • From catysmom1028 on September 12, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From voraciousreader on September 11, 2008
    Just as a sort of mental exercise, are you going to have Severus use the spell on a Dark revel so all the Death Eaters can see what Ol' Moldy Shorts is really like?
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  • From Darkwolf01 on September 11, 2008
    Love the new chapter, Chapter 4. Glad i could help, and i completely understand the rush to get a chapter up and running before going to work and the like. There's bound to be typos or mistakes that we ourselves can't see as we write. I immediatly noticed the changes in the fourth chapter, and i enjoyed it very much. You've captured Severus quite well, so well done. The new chapter explains a lot. The door left open in his distraction, Hermiones' looks and the sudden kiss. I was worried there for a moment at the end of chapter 3 that suddenly they'd end up fondling and falling into bed, or whatever people have in mind when they make these scenes. I'm glad you didn't and i like how Severus allowed it simply because she was out of sorts.

    Keep it up :)

    Wolf
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  • From Shalengreh on September 11, 2008
    fun fun fun
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 11, 2008
    I've enjoyed what I read so far. I 'm wondering about the spell and the potion. It seems to be a way to see physically what people hide from others. Snape's manifestation is interesting, and I wonder, if anyone had done the spell if they would see him in the same light.

    It's an intriguing concept and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From noeby on September 10, 2008
    one thing extra, I'll just comment on the end of 3. It does seem a little rushed or out of context that she suddenly wants to kiss him. But as I read your intent, she sees him as being more pure of heart, younger, quite different to the snape they know, and she is very attracted to that. And her guard is down. Well, that's how I read it. I guess I prefer it when it's gradual build up, but it depends on what's coming next. As to the details: all writers improve on that as they go and often betas pick up that sort of stuff. I'm enjoying the premise of this story a lot.
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  • From noeby on September 10, 2008
    The interaction was excellent. I liked how you wrote Snape here. Good stuff.
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  • From Darkwolf01 on September 10, 2008
    Ok, I don't often leave constructive criticism, as i'm not used to criticising other peoples work. I prefer not to, as i feel like i'm telling them what to do, or telling them something is wrong when i don't mean it to be. So if you think my comments are in any way bad, or make you uncomfortable or make you think you're not doing anything right, please feel free to delete my review. :) After all, it's your story not mine.

    Now, ok, i like the first chapter. It's interesting. Confusing at first, obviously as we have to find out what happened to her to see other people differently. For example she sees Madam Pomfrey, but doesn't describe what was different. That's fine. Perhaps Hermione has the idea to go and look for a book to help her figure out what happened, or else waits until she can remember herself what's happened and try to piece it together. Which i see you've done in Chapter 2.

    This line,
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  • From Shalengreh on September 10, 2008
    ok...you've got my attention....more more more!
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  • From noeby on September 10, 2008
    very interesting start!
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