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Reviews for You Really Got A Hold On Me

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From skyeryder01 on December 10, 2019

    Loved this! 


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  • From SnapesOnlyOne on January 27, 2015
    Naked Lucius appearing randomly naked is NOT a problem, just saying, send him this way if he is being a nuisance
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  • From oliversangel on April 07, 2009
    Oh, I love that song. It makes me think of that scene in 'I Love Trouble', where Nick Nolte and Julia Roberts are desperately trying to make each other jealous. ^.^ That was a lovely bit of smut. Isn't your muse so evil for teasing you with naked Lucius....if only I were so lucky. ^.^ Well, going to tackle a longer one now. ^.^

    XXOO
    Ero
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  • From smmz79 on January 25, 2009
    OMG i REALLY REALLY REALLY think that you should make this a fic.... i would love to read about ron harry and draco all being friends while luna and neville are dancing around a romance and lucius and hermione are so drawn to each other.... i would love to read how they settle all of their disagreements with lucius kissing hermione and making her forget.....
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  • From on October 28, 2008
    You really got me hooked on Hermione and Lucius. :) Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Jesse on October 07, 2008
    That was fun!! I liked that one!! Great job. You always do this so well.
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  • From jddammann on October 06, 2008
    Loved it, and hoping for more! It is a great beginning for a longer story even if it isn't too long. It also stands alone nicely. Basically, I guess I am just always looking for good stories, but mostly good authors like you.

    Thanks again,

    Morgana
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  • From kazfeist on October 02, 2008
    Crikey, this was delicious, S_G! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2008
    I am of the opinion that you should rename yourself Slytherins'_Goddess because you are the mistress of the characters you command every time you bring your brilliant stories to life on the screen whether it be Lucius, Draco or Snape so wonderfully ensnared in your spell. I haven't read all of your stories (I am getting there) so I don't know if you have/haven't written about Blaise yet because he is my other favourite Slytherin and I know without a doubt you can (or have) do/done great things with him too. As for this divine addition to your repitoire, LMAO on the no no place, that was hysterical and of course you can't dare a Gryffindor to do anything and think that they won't see it through. (Lavender should have known better). And poor Ron, I think everyone but him is getting laid tonight. LOL I agree with Luna's observation, dancing can indeed be foreplay and I so want to dance with Lucius right now. Might pass on the sex in the rain but he can certainly whisk me away to a villa in Tuscany anytime he likes. (I know, I know, I have to wait in line - someone send me one of the other Slytherin sexpots while I wait). Sheer magic, once again, S_G!!! :)
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  • From gtbioteach on October 01, 2008
    My husband doesn't stand a chance next time it rains.

    Great story - as always. Love how you ended it - having to shut her up. Also, the part with Lavender being po'ed at Ron for knowing of Hermione's "lack of virginity" was hilarious.
    As always, I appreciate your sense of humor.

    Next??????
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  • From carha on October 01, 2008
    That was a cute little oneshot. You can't deny Lucius when he is knocking on your door. (I know I never would)Great job hun, looking forward to your next piece.

    and a quick question, do you plan to do anything more with Girl Talk? I hope so!
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  • From Gertie on October 01, 2008
    The line about Lucius' "no no place" made me choke on a pretzel and thus taught me never read amazing, sexy, and funny fics while eating.
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  • From ANON - Angelbaby on October 01, 2008
    Funny I have the same problem with Lucius and Severus popping up naked infront of me, they seem to take turns. Well this was a lovely little piece, Lucius in all his glory and something about a no no place...........anywho I want to encourage you to keep going on your next Severus piece 'cause you know he's my favourite. My favourite Sevvy of your writing is from 'The Bond'. I hope this one is a little bit sweet 'cause he's extra yummy when he's like that. Happy writing Babe...Hugs
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  • From Larrabee on October 01, 2008
    I love your one-shots. What a way to hold us over until a full FF.

    You have a real talent. The way you can create such chemistry between different characters, and the way you create such realistic chracterizations of said characters. I love it.

    I can't wait for more of your stories. I have read them all... several times, in fact. And I have read all of Ms_Figg's, so I pretty much have nothing to do...

    I mean, except, study for L-SATs, finish my thesis, and work. lol.

    All the best, to you and yours, as always,
    Elaine
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  • From ANON - Lexi on September 30, 2008
    i, for one, am incredibly happy that naked lucius keeps taking over your mind. :)
    this story is just... woo!
    i need a cold shower.
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