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Reviews for Little Red Hen

By : AislingSiobhan
  • From ANON - Gena on October 14, 2009
    wow that was brillant i thought at first his aunt WAS GOING to be evil and make him little red ridding hood at a young age or something
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  • From Juana13 on April 18, 2009
    hahahaha so cute, although it would've been sexy to see how fenir would've reacted to a red riding hood harry : )
    loved this! it was funny at the end

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  • From RavenTiger on January 21, 2009
    This was good. Definitly unexpected. I am going to link this in my blog in the coming week. I will review again with the link when I post it in my blog. Peace.
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  • From shadygrl on November 14, 2008
    A good basis for a longer story!
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  • From ANON - kati-chan on November 03, 2008
    lmao that was hilarious good job. Quick note though -- Britain actually consists of: Scotland, England and Wales. I often hear on American TV people referring to Britain and the UK and England as all the same thing but they're not. The Uk is short for the United Kingdom of Great Britain (Scotland, England and Wales) and Northern Ireland. England is only one constituent state of Britain. So, umm... there you have it. You didn't need to say, "Britain, Scotland and Wales." ^_^
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  • From shini2007 on October 31, 2008
    good story...my only question is how would harry be 17 in the yr 1987 if he was one yr old in 1981?
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  • From CherryStarburst on October 30, 2008
    Haha, poor Fenrir. Your story's actually a pretty good basis for a longer plot, really. One thing I noticed, though - 'Britain, Scotland and Wales'. Scotland and Wales are a part of Britain - Great Britain is: England, Northen Ireland, Scotland and Wales. Great story!
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  • From ANON - Coobs on October 29, 2008
    lol loved it, simple, but genious!!
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  • From ANON - Amiyom on October 28, 2008
    Too much exposition. Try "showing" rather than "telling" in your writing.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on October 28, 2008
    Ahahahaha I love how Harry mixed up those characters. And I also love the flow of the story it was quick but it wasnt too quick to make it seem like you rushed it
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  • From on October 28, 2008
    It was a cute story!
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