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Reviews for A Little time in Britain...

By : Onikage
  • From Rochelle101489 on December 20, 2008
    So, this is where you put your story, I kept looking at your story in general section, but anyway, your story is still as awesome as every. I also like how you portrait L personalities, it is almost the same as how I portrait him. I always think L as spoil, a lier (look at how he percentage Light as Kira, which is 5%, and I know he will not give out his deduction, when he is not 90% sure, see his a lier, but I still like him. You can read it in Death Note: How to Read 13.) , hate losing, and have to no social interaction to the outside world at all, and even his successors; Near, Mello, and Matt, did not see his face, they only hear his voice with voice filter on it.

    Question: How come Harry was able to tell the muggles about magic, when there is a law about telling secret to the muggles?
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  • From Rochelle101489 on December 20, 2008
    So, this is where you put your story, I kept looking at your story in general section, but anyway, your story is still as awesome as every.

    Question: How come Harry was able to tell the muggles about magic, when there is a law about telling secret to the muggles?
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  • From ShinigamiClara on December 20, 2008
    oops.. i was just reading through my first paragraph, and i didn't make much sense
    what i meant was that there are plenty of people who have died and have been brought back to life by means of CPR and defibrillators and there is probably a wizarding version of a defib in St Mungos that could effectively bring people back to the world of the living...
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  • From ShinigamiClara on December 20, 2008
    it would have made more sense if one of the conditions was like: you have to experience death (in harry's case he survived the death curs, but that doesn't have to be the only thing... an NDE - near death experience would work just fine...) there are probably plenty of people, wizards included who have technically been dead, ie. their hearts stopping, or they aren't breathing, but are brought back to life... CPR..and i'm sure there's a wizarding version of a defibrillator that would have been a more believable condition, since killing someone and seeing that person die is probably what most wizards and Aurors in particular have done during the war and in the line of duty

    the first condition is a given, being born a wizard.. that makes sense

    the second condition is... i'll give it an OK since seeing death and having experience in death being required to see the god of death is easily understandable... although you have to question, if that is not too simple a clause... i wonder if to see someone die and to watch yourself kill someone (in effect, seeing that person die) can be grouped together into the same clause?

    the final condition... i'll just point to clause number 2 shall i?

    on a personal note, i think it would be more plausible of no 2 or no 3 was replaced by an NDE clause while you just group seeing death and killing while watching that person's last moments into the same clause :D

    (oh... won't harry be punished if he told muggles about the wizarding world? even if he was an auror, the state of secrecy should still be in effect on him...)

    good story none the less, i loved the end of chapter 1! it paved the road to a great story and plot... keep up the good work and i look forward to the next chapter...
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  • From EstherJolie on December 19, 2008
    it sounds great i hope to see more of it soon
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  • From missmayu on December 19, 2008
    I love this story! Light is in trouble now. I'm surprised that he didn't decide to try to get Harry on his side because he could be useful being a wizard. I hope that Harry can help L catch the Kira's and prevents L from dying. L was my favorite DN character so it sucked that he died.
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  • From KageMori on November 29, 2008
    ha! this is pretty intresting so far. this is my first ever DN/HP story ive ever read. i cant wait to read more and i hope that you'll have another chapter out soon.
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  • From K505 on November 27, 2008
    This is wicked! Please send me an e-mail when you update!
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  • From on November 19, 2008
    AHAHAHAHAHAHA! YES!! Please update that was fabulous!
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  • From GemJewel on November 19, 2008
    Love this start!! Update more soon!
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  • From Aibu on November 14, 2008
    Beautiful! Very cute.=) I hope you continue with this story. It's awesome just in the first chapter! And how old is Harry now, anyway?
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  • From on November 13, 2008
    I love it. I cant wait to read more. update soon please.
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  • From mayablackwolf on November 13, 2008
    oh I am definitly loving this XD I have a question though, are L and Harry already together?(I don't think so, they seem like good friends right now but...) also I'm wondering how those two meet, if harry is 15 or so does that mean Siruis already died? hmmm...anyway wow so harry can see Rem without touching the deathnote? that's so cool and orginal! CX I'm sooooo loving this story! so L knows about harry's magic right? also...I'm really curious on how Rem's going to react to harry seeing her...will she somehow know that he's a wizard? so many questions I'm sorry for that, it's just that I'm really likeing this story and I can't wait to see what happens next! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I really can't wait till L and Harry interact with Light and the team...this is soooo coool! XDDDDDDDD
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  • From Rochelle101489 on November 12, 2008
    Is Harry 24 years old here? A year younger than L, I mean the Death Note was set in year 2004 and Harry was born in year 1980; while, L was born in year 1979. Anyway, it make me wonder what Harry did in order to make L admire him, that sure going to be interesting to find out. Also, watch out for your grammar like: Independent Clauses and Dependent Clauses, and when to use the capital letter. Nevertheless, your have a nice plot and your description is very awesome, that I am almost giddy in reading more of your story.

    Anyway, till next time you update again.
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  • From on November 12, 2008
    What an interesting read I can't wait for more chapters, your twist of 'Haruhi' being able to see Rem was amazing. Though it makes you wonder can 'Haruhi' see the Shinigami because of his magic or is it because of his meeting Tom when he was a year old, the possibilities are endless and each are very interesting.

    You have an amazing story on your hands and I hope to read more of it soon.

    Amu-chan xxx
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