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Reviews for If Only For a Moment

By : mollycrown
  • From ANON - Morgan on October 10, 2009
    So cute! It's so hard to find a decent Harry/Hermione fic, and none of the ones I've read seem as natural as this one. I love it.
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  • From ANON - Dawg on September 21, 2009
    Incredibly sexy scene. good job Harry for sticking in to satisfy Hermionie!
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  • From 13Secrets on May 18, 2009
    Very nice! Just read it for the Smutastic Awards, or else I probably would never have found it... But I'm happy I did!

    They were a bit more... foward than I'd think they'd be, especially since it was their first time. But I suppose, in some way, it makes sense. They are comfortable with each other and you showed it wonderfully!

    Great!
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  • From ANON - alethia on April 04, 2009
    Wow, this is perfect! I love how well you portray their relationship as friends who get caught in the moment and realize there's something more between them. I love the wrist-stroking--it's a nice touch and a cute sort of foreplay you don't usually read about. And the way you write about the first time is really accurate without sacrificing sexiness. You've done an excellent job. Keep up the good work!
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  • From Mdunlap on February 05, 2009
    Yum. I think Harry and Hermione make a great couple and this was very nice.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2009
    Considering the story is set in somewhere in england it should follow the seasons there. I'm pretty sure it's winter during x-mas. Still a good story though.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2009
    Dont think it matters if you are aussi for it to be summer it was warm in texas i could walk around in jeans and a t-shirt the other day, no sweater no jacket
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2008
    Nice sexy story. Well written. One thing though, It's both christmas and summer in the story. You might want to check on that.
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on December 27, 2008
    You know I'm not a huge fan of the Harry/Hermione ship but this one was a nice romantic but not overly sickly read. I love for-the-first-time fics and will be recommending this to everyone I chat to!

    Well done!
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