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Reviews for The Heart\'s Desire

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From Persy on July 20, 2021

    How very sweet and precious!!!!


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  • From skyeryder01 on November 30, 2019

    Loved this! 


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  • From Gertie on May 25, 2011
    Enjoying an evening alone with red wine and crisps myself, you really are a balm for the soul. Nothing but the best for you my love!!!
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  • From ANON - Cat on November 03, 2010
    I've read this a few times, but everytime I read it I like it just a bit more. Which is saying something since I really liked it the first time! Just thought I'd let you know that I love reading your fic's, on this site as well as GE and get excited everytime I see a new one, so thanks for sharing your muse! Happy writing and I can't wait to read something new. (was that a subtle enough hint?)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 10, 2010
    Sweet, lovely and sexy, thank you!
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  • From ANON - fairlady on May 01, 2010
    I loved this story. Actually, I've loved every story of yours that I've read (and I am rapidly making my way through all of them). I would love to see this one expanded into a full-length story -- it could be a lot of fun reading about Hermione popping in on Severus in many more situations... and you know it would take quite a few chapters given how stubborn he can be. :)

    Keep up the writing. You've become one of my favorite authors. And you like the bad boys, too.
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  • From knappshari on August 15, 2009
    Are you kidding!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This was fricking AMAZING! Sort of angsty, Hot as hell, with a sampling of light and flirtatious! I Loved It!!!

    Please Do Not Take It Down...
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  • From ANON - Emily on August 14, 2009
    Loved this, so sexy and really well written. Made me laugh several times, and was in character :)
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  • From use2b2t2 on July 13, 2009
    I really liked this story! Very original spell, and Snape just kept pushing away! They are perfect!
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  • From illnevertell on May 06, 2009
    That was wonderful! I actually swooned and I am so not a swooner. I am glad you decided to leave that one up.I enjoyed it very much.
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  • From oliversangel on April 06, 2009
    Awwwww!! Warm and fuzziness abounds!! That was very sweet. Yes, spellcasting when drunk is a *very* bad idea. LOL. But not in this case. I loved how she kept popping in on him everytime she thought of him. I laughed out loud, very hard when I read the line, 'Oh God, she mouth raped him!' You are extremely funny. I also forgot to mention in another review, (see, there's that downside I was talking about) a line that I thought was funny, the Lucius and Hermione PWP, "Fuckfight". Brilliant term. Loved the popping in when there was a horny teenager present, and so like a teenaged boy to state the completely obvious...."Professor, there's a naked girl on your desk" I wished Severus had said in that snarky, snide tone of his, "Oh really, I hadn't noticed." LOL. Well, anywho, fabulous as always my dear, but as I have spent most of the day sitting like a zombie reading your stories, I must take a break, life calls in the form of a hyper toddler. ^.^

    XXOO
    Ero
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  • From magialuna on April 04, 2009
    This is hot and very sweet. I love the idea of a spell that throws them back together. He would have to believe she isn't playing a joke after awhile. Poor Severus that he feels so unworthy of love. He always seems that way. Wonderful story. -Clare
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  • From ANON - TashaRose on March 19, 2009
    Very sweet ending to this one. I loved how they got together here.
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  • From mageemi on March 07, 2009
    Oh my, how on earth did I ever miss this little gem? I usually check on AFF regularly and am always on the lookout for new posts by you but somehow I missed this one. This was a wonderful little one shot, I loved it, please don't even think about taking it down. I loved the way she kept popping in on him wherever he was, just goes to show she couldn't get him out of her mind.
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  • From kazfeist on February 07, 2009
    This was so sweet! This was my first pairing, before I sailed on the Dramione ship...all the more to have Severus for myself, of course! :D I think you've really drawn Severus as I see him. Having to tamp down his feelings and hope for so many years. And he's so happy at the end...even if it's all on the inside. Well done. :D
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