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Reviews for The Morning Star

By : varnalesa
  • From Lara_Kal-El on January 09, 2016
    Chapter 7 needs serious reediting, looks like the coding got messed up. otherwise this is good and I plan on reading the rest of it
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  • From LstCryptonian on May 05, 2011
    ok the past few pages have been amazing but you should proof read before you post. Apparently the page isn't loading correctly and your codes are showing below is an example of what I mean.Otherwise, the story is amazing and I'm enjoying it

    style='mso-ansi-language:EN-US'>The golden trio was sitting on the couch in the
    Room of Requirement playing exploding snap.
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on September 15, 2010
    This fic was starting to get interesting - are you planning on continuing it in the future?


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  • From ANON - alchino on March 19, 2010
    I'm glad you started updating this fic again.
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  • From ANON - Alea Black on February 03, 2010
    I am completely in love with this story. I love every little thing about it. I can't wait to read more! I'll keep checking back for updates.
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  • From ANON - lonelyreverance on December 25, 2009
    love the idea! have waited for something like this for a long time can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - anon on December 12, 2009
    Might want to add a N/C or rape warning in the summary, instead of springing it on us halfway trough the story. Did not read on. Pity.
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  • From on December 09, 2009
    This is wonderful! I'm completely at lost for words, that's how good your story is. I look forward to your next update!
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  • From serenagold on October 29, 2009
    Wow. I just stumbled upon this story for the first time and I'm really enjoying it. You've done an excellent job with this. I love the pure panic that Snape is going through. I'm also enjoying the blossoming relationship between Draco and Hermione. Keep up the great work. I'll be looking forward to where you go with this.
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  • From evanone on October 29, 2009
    I'm glad you started updating this fic again. I hope to see next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - alchino on September 28, 2009
    very good story
    please I dont want severus to choose harry as king
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  • From on April 19, 2009
    No! NO! You can't just have poor Sev raped in the previous scene and then not fill in the gaps... OH GHOD!!! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!
    *ahem*
    Yes, brilliant, great story. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - misswarchan on March 09, 2009
    This was a very interesting chapter. I really enjoyed it! Please update again soon! ;D
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  • From abbicee on March 08, 2009
    I have to admit I'm getting a bit confused about the whole legend thing and how it applies to Snape. I suspect I'll have to read it again several times before it starts to make sense. Maybe I'll have to read a bit about the whole Twelve Kingdoms thing. While it's your story and you should take it where you desire, I will say that LV/SS is one of my least favorite pairings so I'm hoping you won't take it there, or at least that's not how it will be at the end. Still, it's your story so you must do as you feel right. Is there a rescue in sight for Severus or will it be a while yet?
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  • From ANON - misswarchan on March 02, 2009
    Yay! An update! Very nice, I'll be looking forward to the next as well! ^-^
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