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Reviews for Valentinus Is a Bastard

By : realluciusmistress
  • From mrequecky on February 24, 2010
    Loved, I wonder if there will be a sequel???
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  • From darkness100 on January 31, 2010
    very very well written! Would have preferred harry to be a little more vocal, and some more detail but other than that nice work!
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  • From Lightningbook on June 22, 2009
    I'm not sure how to put this without sounding repulsive or repulsed. This story has great potential to become a wonderful love story or a life of angsty torment for Harry. Guess it depends on how you want to view Luc. I have to say the idea presented of him raping Harry at any age does not appeal to me as rape scenarios are not all that thrilling (unless they are an acted out fantasy between a couple) but i found the writing tasteful and that Luc gave Harry even the smallest affections helpful to keep me from falling into a complete foul hatred for Luc right off the bat. Well done.
    Secretly hoping for a love story ;)
    Sev
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  • From CandyCakes on March 28, 2009
    So, I was reading stories and I thought to myself "I want a story where someone real cute gets abused real bad. I should check out Harry/Lucius..." And then I read your story. It completely hit the spot.
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  • From damnedphoenix156 on March 09, 2009
    wicked evil !!!!!!!


    :P

    poor harry the last line was heart breaking, kill the blond bastard whom i still love nonetheless!!!
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  • From Rokkis on February 17, 2009
    Sick and twisted and totally pointless! Well written though!

    Cheers!
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  • From alma on February 17, 2009
    Good story!!!! how about a sequel!
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  • From realluciusmistress on February 16, 2009
    Dhalim: Thanks! *running out of cookies and first-borns, hands over a bar of chocolate instead*
    I'm SO glad you thought it worked! I was a bit worried I was making Harry a bit too submissive in the middle. But then again, no-one says no to Lucius :)
    I'm totally in love with the chocolate-thing, even if it IS a bit AUish... Lucius is good at tormenting Har-I mean people XD
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  • From Dhalim on February 16, 2009
    Poor Harry.

    You did a good job at showing both his defiance to authority figures and submissiveness when it comes to circumstances out of his control, and balancing them in a way that makes sense. I like how you put in the bit about the chocolate, giving Harry a way to possibly get his memory back on his own, and Lucius a way to torment him some more. This looks promising ^^ looking forward to the new chapter
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  • From realluciusmistress on February 15, 2009
    DTDY: Thank you! I'm very glad you liked :) *hands cookies (still not pink or heart-shaped)*

    Lunicorn: Thank you SO much for your wonderful review! You totally made my day! My first-born will be yours if you want it :) It meant the world to me to hear you thought my writing is good. As for the angst, well, I sort of tried to find if there's anything that'll make me feel sorry for Harry. There's just something about him that screams "Target!" to me :) OK, I'm not entirely evil: I DID feel a little sorry for him at the beginning at least...
    Mrs Figg is really not a central character in this, but since there seems to be some interest in her she might appear again later... We'll see :)
    Yeah, the Obliviate-trick is getting kinda old, so YAY that you saw something original in mine!
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  • From ANON - Lunicorn on February 14, 2009
    Disturbing as that was, I have to tell you that you're very good. You evoked Harry and his stream of consciousness thoughts and responses really well, and built and built his little nightmare to heartwrenching end. Poor Harry, denied even the pleasures of chocolate. His life really does suck. Timing wise, I can only wonder if Mrs. Figgs' broken leg and Harry's subsequent visit to the Zoo on Dudley's next birthday aren't related... Perhaps she found a spine? Or at least a way to thwart Lucius' threat of next year. That was very well done. The oblviate- and-repeat plot has been done a fair amount, but you managed to give it an extra little knife twist and leave me dying to warn Harry somehow. Not to mention the fact that most of your readers will have to think their VD disasters paled beside Harry's. You've got skills :)
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  • From realluciusmistress on February 14, 2009
    Wynja: You're welcome :) Yeah, there can never be enough abusive Harry/Lucius *sigh*. Have you tried Beloved Enemies btw? The best place for this kind of stuff... Thanks for the lovely review, I was insecure as hell about this one. *hands a huge box of cookies that have absolutely nothing to do with pink hearts*
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  • From realluciusmistress on February 14, 2009
    Sneakyfox: Thank you so much! *hands a huge box of cookies, but not pink heart-shaped ones* There will be quite a lot more: at least one encounter for every one of Harry's school years, possibly beyond... I'm evil, I know :)
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  • From wynja on February 14, 2009
    OMG I loved it! Yeah, I'm probably a perv for it, but I don't care! *grin* I LOOOOOOOVE dark harry/Luc and there are so few of them out there... Please continue? Thank you for the perfect valentines-day gift!
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  • From serenagold on February 14, 2009
    Holy crap! Awesome abuse fic.
    Keep up the great work.



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