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Reviews for Revenge Of The Ravenclaw

By : JayDee
  • From ANON - bigrig56 on June 07, 2014
    An interesting but definately fucked up story. But it was still interesting, keep up the good work... I'm surprised I haven't seen you write a Lily Potter fic yet with all your other HP fics that you have written.
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  • From ANON - A sane person on May 30, 2012
    Hahaha oh boy this was hilarious and retarded!
    You said that you would portray rape in it's true horrid form yet what I see in this story is a fetishised version of rape, the sex scenes are described with great detail like smut. You made Cho into some hentai tentacle rape monster crossed over with the girl from The Grudge - a more racist portrayal of Cho I have never seen.

    This looks like a massive porn parody rather than something disturbing. Why were the Slytherins breeding mud loose when they are supposed to be exterminated? The swelling of their bodies sounds like pregnancy fetish and we have enough of it on youporn.
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  • From ANON - Laila2605 on September 14, 2011
    Hmm, I wonder that One Man isn't going to out to be Harry, taking his revenge on the girls and the slytherins....

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  • From slayer5767 on February 28, 2009
    All I can say is just 'Wow'..
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  • From ANON - Zhek on February 24, 2009
    I think this is your best work yet, and also is Ginny dead?
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