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Reviews for Sea Change

By : Jilliane
  • From ANON - myladymystere on May 24, 2011
    found this in the archives and loved it. Very diff plot. Sorry that it there was not more posted.
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  • From betelgeuse on April 25, 2011
    So far I like this story. I really adore when Severus is revealed as Harry's father (much, much better than James sr.), but I fail to see how a relationship between Al and Scorpius can be forbidden: they should have the same father (or the same mother) but if Sev is Al's grandfather, the worst is for Scorpius to be his uncle (Sev and Draco as Scor's parents) or his first cousin (Sev and Lucius as Draco's real parents), therefore in England is perfectly legal for Scor and Al to be in a relationship (even in the wizarding world for all the pureblood families are related so there are a lot of marriage between first cousin). Or Sev is Scorpius' father too? I really hope not.
    Hope to read the answer soon.
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  • From magentasouth on April 25, 2011
    um... still waiting for the explanation of how exactly snape being harry's father has anything whatsoever to do with scorpius and albus being closely related. Its like.. er.. wait.. what?!
    I assume some sense will emerge when lucius turns up.
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  • From on April 25, 2011
    I like but I do not understand it at first said that Scorpio and Albus are family later means that the real father of Harry is Snape.
    understanding of what Lily is pregnant of the best I think later I will pull my doubt.
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  • From ANON - sin on February 07, 2011
    i totally love it! and I want to ask if you are going to continue? please let me know!
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  • From ANON - Mona on January 26, 2011
    This is a great story so far and I hope you write another chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Nina Pina on January 20, 2011
    Still waiting for an update. :) I like this story so far, I'll be patient as I can for more.
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  • From SickPuppy on March 08, 2010
    Ahhh, what a great chapter chapter four is. I love the character driven scenes we get, and there are some superb ones in here. Harry is a fantastic father, and poor Severus seems less than thrilled at meeting up with Harry - hmm, I wonder why?! It's got a great rhythm to it - odd, I know, but it flows nicely and builds beautifully. And, I know I got a sneak peek at it, but I was thinking about a line from it yesterday and couldn't remember if JKR had written it, or you had - that's how good it is!

    SP
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  • From tambrathegreat on March 05, 2010
    I love how you juxtaposed Snape's slightly sad farewell to his empty house and Harry's kid-bustling farewell to his family. It's so sad that Snape, after all these years, still has no one to see him off, to love him. You better fix this and quick, J. I don't like sad Snape.

    I can't wait to see what Harry thinks when he realises Snape is on staff and will be interacting with him on a daily basis.

    Great job, and I'm glad you're back.

    T
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on March 04, 2010
    Confused but quite curious! Thanks for sharing, PW
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  • From ArchNemesis on November 17, 2009
    Please continue. I'm thoroughly enjoying every minute.

    Nemesis ^_~
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  • From countesszero on November 01, 2009
    lovely story - there are not enough snape/lucius stories out there, and snape = harry's father! so nice. (ok, so i guess they WON'T be up for a threesome in this story).

    it's a pity that this story didn't continue as it seemed you had fun writing it: the narrative and the dialogues felt so energetic and real.
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  • From ANON - cravedom on September 02, 2009
    A thousands apologies dear! I moved back to the US (was in South America) and since we were all sharing my laptop it was hard to get the time to read my stories.

    Usually when I get a late update (not harassing you, promise) it is necessary for me to read the story again or at least the last chapter. However since time is so tight I decided to just read it, not hoping to understand because frankly I could not even remember what the story was about. To my surprise after the second paragraph everything came back to me! I would like to think that the Ginkgo Biloba is working but it is probable the fact that you wrote the scene seamlessly. It was like I had just read the previous chapters a couple of weeks before. Well not really a couple of weeks ago I was drowning in boxes
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  • From dirtydarella on August 20, 2009
    Hey, I was going through old emails and found a notification of the prologue and chapter one from months ago, sorry!

    But I was excited to see there are three chapters. ^_^ (I recognize part from LJ)

    Anyway, I just love the way you write Snape in this. He's the perfect blend of bitter and sarcastic, lol. So entertaining. ^_^

    It will be interesting to see how his relationship with Lucius will develop. :D
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  • From ANON - DTDY on August 09, 2009
    I applaud you.
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