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Reviews for Indecent Proposal

By : Seacilin
  • From lex1621 on July 28, 2009
    This is absolutely incredible and I can't wait for the next chapter! Harry and Severus relationship is extremely interesting and I can't wait to see how it develops.
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  • From Briarrows69 on May 25, 2009
    I like the first two chapters. I'm intrigued, please write more.
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  • From cookycorkran on May 14, 2009
    I hope you do continue this story its great
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  • From Makovaso on May 11, 2009
    Good story.
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  • From disgruntledfairy on April 03, 2009
    Gah! That was some sexy smut! Loved it. Rough lovin' while enjoyin' every minute is what it's all about! I loved the twist with Severus loving? Harry (or at least seeming to). Very entertaining. I hope you can update this story again soon. Until then!
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  • From PanonDaur on April 01, 2009
    I really enjoyed your story.
    However, there were a few things that irked me.

    'Entrance' or 'hole', would have been preferable to the repeated use of 'pucker'.

    Also, lubrication. It's a must for safety, even in the fantasy realm. Or, you could have said that Harry (as an incubus) would have natural lubrication.

    These are just my recommendations.

    But, I did enjoy your story very much, your style is very entertaining and well; I look forward to reading more.
    -Pan-

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  • From POOHBEAR74 on March 27, 2009
    are you going to update this?
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  • From fairytopian on March 20, 2009
    well done as usual. I hope you can update soon.
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  • From pontaloon on March 19, 2009
    you write like a published author! there are some run-on sentences, but it reads amazingly!
    i also like how you take a clich
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  • From Demonicone on March 14, 2009
    Awesome story. Although the first chapter might be easier to read if it was in a different format or something, like the second chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next. ^_^
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  • From Aalto on March 11, 2009
    For the sex scenes, a bit more detail, and I would say, that the Dark Lord would at least have to take very good care of the Incubus!Harry and at some level have positive feelings for it/him for the pregnancy to succeed.

    A very good story, interesting idea and I just love creature!Harry stories! Keep up the good work!
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  • From Ravenheart on March 11, 2009
    That sex scene was... not as arousing as I expected from an incubus coupling. Too technical, and not... dirty enough I suppose. You could just as easily use 'cock' or 'penis' instead of 'member' and 'anus' or 'ass' instead of 'ring of muscles'.
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  • From wynja on March 10, 2009
    Second chapter and I love it even more... what a twist! Scary how Voldemort thought of Harry as an "it", an animal... hmmm... wonder if some "light" Wizards share that view? Can't WAIT for more, but I patientely will.... ;o)
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  • From artemyl on March 09, 2009
    the sex scene wasn't that bad, just one thing: lubrication. Other than that, the story is intriguing, so please do continue!
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  • From LadyoftheShadows86 on March 08, 2009
    This is very interesting...let's see where it's headed to.
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