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By : andarte
  • From mlui on May 25, 2009
    "Draco's Dark Mark served as a painful reminder of the fact and he finally pulled back."

    Er, but I thought in the paragraph before Hermione was able to get rid of the pain without Voldemort knowing and that it should last?

    Fabulous chapter though. It's a bit sad that Draco couldn't stay, but he's got to do what he's gotta do. =)
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  • From Eilisbelle on May 25, 2009
    however long the wait, it was really worth it. I know it short, but you really packed in the emotion!! I really love the detail, how you seem to draw on your own experiences with paganism, and put it in as fuel. I love also how you really describe the flow of both forms of magick. Excellent chapter, and I hope that what was killing your inspiration is gone now!!
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  • From dragongirl on May 25, 2009
    Hey Welcome back, you got me worried for a moment there, this story is a beautiful one and I hope that more chapters are going to be added in a very near future, we need more from this Galahad/Draco and Hermione, Voldie is gone but what about Lucius? that is another ball game.. LOL
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  • From Arodri59 on May 24, 2009
    intriguing...
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  • From dragongirl on May 04, 2009
    Ok, so Snape is the worst snake there, oops it almost rime lol. Going strong and wonderful, please more more more....
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  • From mlui on May 03, 2009
    11: Very nice chapter! Couldn't Draco still go to his summons for now?
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  • From mlui on April 27, 2009
    10: Yah!! Another update!! This was a very interesting chapter, especially since it talked about the magic. I can't wait to see the selected Order members reactions! I really want to see Severus' when he realizes Draco is there! =)
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  • From Eilisbelle on April 27, 2009
    that was a *brilliant* chapter!! I am really really really enjoying your story. There's not enough pagan D/Hr stories out there!!
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  • From winter748 on April 25, 2009
    I really, really like this story idea. You used the time turner but in such an original way. Also, you write very well and are keeping the characters consistent within the story. With the Lake missing its' Lady for so long this could also explain the rise of two Dark Lords so close together.
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  • From Eilisbelle on April 25, 2009
    that was a fabulous update, so glad they found each other again!!
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  • From mlui on April 25, 2009
    9: Great chapter! No I don't mind you updating early! =) Well, I would have supposed that she'd be somewhat incacipated since she's pregnant, but it also makes sense that she needs to control her powers too. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From margaritama on April 25, 2009
    well, Draco is her Protector....how will the others react?
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  • From margaritama on April 25, 2009
    I'll have you, I'll have you....

    Okay...what happened at Grimwauld???
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  • From margaritama on April 25, 2009
    Yes, so Draco is Galahad and he remembers now....how will Hermione react? Hmm, not sure if the daughter should be Galahad or Dralahad (Draco/Galahad)....but I guess its the same? What now?
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  • From dragongirl on April 25, 2009
    I am so happy that you post this ... anxiety is the word .... Love this Galahad/Draco combination that you have done is simply great!!!! MORE MORE MORE PLEASE..........
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