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Reviews for Beauty of the Swan

By : ArwendeImladris
  • From maegerakawaii on April 23, 2009
    I like it a lot. I don't normally read crossovers. In fact, this is the first crossover I have ever read, and I am happy to say that I love it. I do hope you update soon, because I am very excited to know what will happen next. As for flashes of Legolas' training, I think it would be fine to show some but it would only have to be ones that were directly significant to how he has turned out (matured?). Adding in flashes just for the sake of having them might be distracting and pointless to the reader, but that is just my personal opinion so don't take it too seriously.
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  • From RavenclawSamurai on April 23, 2009
    Lol! I'm loving this! It was great seeing Harry grows up. I really like the idea of him being a Healer. Legolas should also have chance to change and mature (he needs to be shown growing up like Harry or else he'll still be a mean brat). ANd i love how you transformed the characters Edenost and Ithilwen as a Neville and Luna. Thanks for the updates! Will wait eagerly for more!!! :D
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  • From knj4k4 on April 23, 2009
    Maybe a few short flashes of Legolas, I'm impatient to get back to his punishment by Harry.
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  • From lazycrazykitten on April 23, 2009
    Huh...that's actually pretty clever. I thought Ithelwen(sp?) was acting kinda familiar. I never would have guessed you had translated their names into Elvish. I don't think you need to show too much of Legolas' training...though a few embarassing moments may help satisfy the need for revenge. You know, Legolas having a poncy arrogant moment only for someone to slap him down a few pegs.
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  • From slashslut on April 23, 2009
    loving this story so far and i can't wait for them to reunite. i hope harry gives him hell;)
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  • From wolfcathope on April 23, 2009
    wow really beutiful please keep going
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  • From lovershatred on April 23, 2009
    i really love this story . please write more soon .
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  • From lazycrazykitten on April 23, 2009
    Good. That should toughen Legolas up.
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  • From knj4k4 on April 23, 2009
    I like it. I like the way he has to grow up and I like Harry's way to prove useful.
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  • From alma on April 23, 2009
    Awesome start!
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  • From Trallala on April 23, 2009
    Awww, this is so qute! Little Harry is adorable, I can't wait to see what happens when they grow up :0)
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  • From knj4k4 on April 22, 2009
    ...that was pretty evil. It's probably a good thing that you can make the transition between beautiful and ugly, not a lot of authors can do that. I'll just pretend it didn't make me want to throw up....Can he be at least a decent elf being when he's grown up?? PLease?
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  • From Guderian on April 22, 2009
    I have to say, in this case I agree with the old saying, "Spare the rod, spoil the child." Legolas needs to be taken over someone's knee for a good few years or so.

    Besides that, all of your stories are well written, and I find much enjoyment at reading them.
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  • From Sakya on April 22, 2009
    That... that #%
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  • From lazycrazykitten on April 22, 2009
    That's horrible!!! I wouldn't be forgiving him anytime soon either.
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