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By : pandabur912
  • From lckarlsson on July 13, 2009
    Thanks for two good chapters. Yeah, he does act a little out of character, and I think it would be a little harder for just one girl to take out Lucius... but it's nice to see tough girls for a change.

    Keep up the good work, and you
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  • From lckarlsson on May 30, 2009
    You're welcome for the reviews :-)

    Thanks for another great chapter. I wonder if he'll be able to keep her from Lucius in the long run. It would be interesting to see him rebel against his father in some way. And of course I'm looking forward to see if he'll be able to help Robyn, and to see what happens if they do find her family/friends. It's quite a difficult situation for both of them, because - in a way - Draco is just as trapped as she is... the consequences will be serious, if he is caught helping her.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From lckarlsson on May 25, 2009
    Chapters 2 and 3 were great :-)

    I love how tough the women are in your story, it gives it a nice twist.

    The smut was fine :-)

    And I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
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  • From lckarlsson on May 24, 2009
    This is very good for a first fic. I've only read chapter one so far, but I'm hooked to your story already. I like the way you portray Draco, and I like how strong you original character is. And... well... I found Draco's reaction to her pretty hot ;-)

    But I have to let you know that you're spelling Lucius' name wrong.

    Otherwise... keep up the good work :-D
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