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Reviews for Revivel

By : fanboy69
  • From ANON - Winged-ashes on October 13, 2014
    It's really good plz update soon
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  • From ANON - Brenna P on October 12, 2013
    I love this story and can't wait to see where it will go considering it doesn't seem finished. It has a number of spelling mistakes, but those are somewhat easily ignored by the content of the story.
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  • From penylane on January 03, 2012
    I really really really can't wait to read more! One of the best Harry/Ron plots I have found!
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  • From penylane on January 03, 2012
    Really great story! I truly can't wait to read some more!!
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  • From firebolt86 on December 12, 2010
    you have got to update!!! simply amazing!!!
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  • From Ravenheart on July 02, 2009
    Now... while the plot - so far - is good, you have some problems, mainly with forgetting to type some words and misspelling, nothing serious mind but it gives the story that 'I'm only writing for reviews' which I'm almost certain that's not the way you're thinking. May I suggest you get a beta reader??
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  • From SilverLion on May 26, 2009
    Overall: Great set-up. Execution's not too bad. Spelling and grammar need a LOT of work. The sex scene wasn't bad, it was almost rape, but stayed on the side of a rough seduction. I do find myself wondering what's going on with Hermione while all this is happening, but I'm sure you'll get to it eventually.
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  • From pointoftears on May 25, 2009
    Great story so far! I have always been a fan of Harry/Ron stories, but have found some writers to be hit or miss. This seems like it is going to be a hit.
    I like your writing style. I especially like the speach pattern you gave Hedwig. She is a bird, not a human, and would have a rather disjointed use of english language. So good job on that part!
    I also liked the part where Harry was reading his book and petting the bat (Who I am assuming is Snape...am I right?). The image of this that played in my mind was really...well, sweet I guess. Don't know if that is what you were going for...
    Once again, great first two chapters and I can't wait to read more!
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