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Reviews for In Love and War

By : crysta656
  • From jracklesfan77 on September 26, 2011
    I was just wondering if you had plans to update this story or if I should remove it from the list of fics I check for updates every few weeks.

    Thank you for and interesting tale (however deplorable certain characters may be!)

    Regards,
    Shay
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  • From ANON - Nycginny on February 03, 2011
    I just finished reading ILAW and I absolutely loved it. I hope that you finish it. I truly enjoy how you depicted Lucius and Hermione's character. I also like the fact that Ron is acting on his inner demons since in the actual series he is filled with jealousy and envy. (Yeah don't like him much). Keep writing, what I have read so far is very good.
    Sincerely,

    Vilma
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  • From ANON - Zyra on September 14, 2010
    Wow your story is absolutely amazing. I think I fell in love with it. I
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  • From ANON - Malefica on August 07, 2010
    Your writing is dark but also full of strong emotions and feeling. I hope you finish your stories because they deserve closure, we all do, and for the pain to ease to allow healing. The pain and sorrow, are palpable and raw. Lucius and Hermoine, deserve recognition and vindication . Maybe instead of hurting others, should they find peace? Love so strong that makes all envious; and to forgive them all in a public audience, maybe Lucius opens a legal center for war victims seeking retribution? Revenge not in destruction but in rising above the other ? Besides that have your beta correct the grammar and clean it up a little. Keep it up, both and Chalie's tale should be finished, they are sad and beautiful. They could have good endings that demonstrate the human power of survival and healing. Hmm, through rebirth and new life...do I hear babies crying? Enemies hate happy people...hint
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  • From ANON - Ally on April 13, 2010
    I love this!!! I hope there will be more!!!
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  • From dragongirl on April 10, 2010
    This is enchanting!!!!!! I love what you have plan for Ron, but I insist maybe Lavander will kick his butt good? That will be the day for Won Won! LOL
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  • From voraciousreader on April 09, 2010
    I wasn't expecting an update so soon, and to get two chapters was even better! I hope Lucius lends her a lawyer that is half shark, half goblin and ALL mean! I can hardly wait to see what he does to the freckled wart. Let's face it, Slytherins are at their very best when avenging their loved ones--it's why we love the bad boys, isn't it? Well done!
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  • From dragongirl on April 09, 2010
    Ok we need to regroup! Why? We need to kick Ron's butt PRONTO! and good. Please stop him! Git! Sorry to involved, LOL. And this just make me think about all the women that are going through the same........ Well I need some romance but first things first we need revenge and a very public one. Punishment to all that put her down all these years.
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  • From ANON - DragonflyRyder on April 08, 2010
    What a wonderful story you have here. I hope you have a new update soon. Hope that Ron gets his just deserts.
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  • From voraciousreader on April 07, 2010
    I have this urge to use an 'Engorgio' spell on a papershredder and then lower Ron into it feet first so he can watch his body become as small as his brains and personality. You wrote that chapter a little too well, I think. It was horrifying, and you have a lot of talent, especially if as you said in an earlier note, that this is un-beta'd. I am delighted to see that you decided to update, however and will wait eagerly for more.
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  • From tambrathegreat on November 16, 2009
    I am shocked that your beta-reader said that this story was crap. I'm also glad that you dropped them. While this story, like most others on this site (mine included), is rough in spots, it's well told and gives us a thoughtful look at what might have been. I like your Lucius and his internal struggles. I like your less than perfect Hermione. Thanks for sharing this with us.


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  • From dragongirl on November 11, 2009
    Ron and Harry and the rest are gits........ ARG! Ok this was sweet so please do not make us wait for the good part that would be kicking everyones butt!!!!! LOL
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  • From margaritama on November 07, 2009
    What a great update. I love the look into his psyche. And the interaction with Draco was wonderful.

    Lucius losing his temper was fascinating...taking out his anger and frustrations on the paintings. But how will he deal with the growing feelings for Hermione? And she clearly loves him.
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  • From dragongirl on November 02, 2009
    Good to see you around and well... Please more this is where the story really would start
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  • From voraciousreader on October 31, 2009
    Glad to see you are back! Nice transitional chapter, and very revealing of Lucius' change of attitude.
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