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By : crysta656
  • From theycallmeSweet on April 25, 2010
    Great writing and so entertaining! I enjoy the tension although I think it would be more believable if you made Hermione's dislike of Lucius more disdainful and cautious than hostile and please clarify a bit more of Hermione's reactions and her awareness of them when Lucius touches her. But other than it is wonderful to read :) updateupdateupdate!
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  • From margaritama on April 24, 2010
    I love how he seems to be suddenly turning up in all these unexpected places...very slytherin.
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  • From margaritama on April 24, 2010
    funny, fast paced, smartly witty and completely enthralling....LOVE IT
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  • From lemonade8 on April 24, 2010
    I like your Hermione, although she is being WAY too nice to people who are bossing her around, lol. I do NOT like her grandmother, though. And Lucius... he's got a lot of making up to do. Added to the wartime issues and his death eater status, he ruined Hermione's ministry career. Hermione will be hard pressed to even tolerate him, much less anything more. But you have written an engaging story so far, so I am looking forward to seeing you meet this challenge.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on June 24, 2009
    When are you gonna update? I'm hooked already and its just the first chapter :D Please please update soon! I wanna see what happens!
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  • From IntegraHellsing on June 24, 2009
    This sounds like it will be a lot of fun! I'm curious to find out more. Please update soon
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  • From savigar on June 03, 2009
    Oooh, nice beginning. You have me looking forward to more.
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  • From jasminejoanleigh on May 31, 2009
    loved it! update again soon please :D
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  • From voraciousreader on May 30, 2009
    You ARE going to keep going, right? Right? Don't abandon this just when it's getting good!
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  • From chickaboo on May 29, 2009
    Oh my gosh this is amazing. Very original idea and so far you've captured both Lucius and Hermione perfectly. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From luciusmalfoy76 on May 28, 2009
    looking forward to chapter 2
    Why is it the more smarmy Lucius Malfoy gets the hotter he is?
    A grand job
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  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on May 28, 2009
    Oh, this could be FUN. Carry on.
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  • From ffpoisongirl on May 28, 2009
    An interesting and well-written beginning. Can't wait to see where it goes.
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