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Reviews for Black Knight, White Queen

By : andarte
  • From mlui on July 09, 2009
    6: Lovely ending! Yeah, an epilogue was definitely needed, otherwise, it wouldn't have felt like the story has concluded with the Draco/Hermione perspective. This way, we wouldn't wonder! Fantastic writing! =)
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  • From kazfeist on July 09, 2009
    Lovely epilogue. Of course Draco would wait til he's in the throes of passion to ask her to marry him. ;D
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  • From Robs on July 08, 2009
    Fantastic story! I have to admit, it was the chess title that drew me in in the first place, and that theme made it so intriguing, but at the same time, it all fit in so well together. I love the ending too. Yes it was a little shorter than the other chapters, but it's not as important as getting it right. Which you very much did. Keep up the good work! I shall be looking out for more of your work!
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  • From margaritama on July 08, 2009
    never ever apologize for how you end a story...if it feels right to you, that's all that matters. its your story. I thought it was lovely...very little words, just actions. nicely done.
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  • From caseyjarryn on July 08, 2009
    such a beautiful ending!
    great fic!!
    xoxo
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  • From mlui on July 05, 2009
    5: Great chapter! Glad the disaster you had is mainly over. Guess that really shows how much he depended on security and what happens when it goes lax.
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  • From Robs on July 05, 2009
    All the best plans are the simple ones! That was a fabulous chapter. Now we finally have Voldemort out of the way, Draco need not be so protective over Hermione. Not that it will stop him, LOL. All these chess references are so clever! I really love this story. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From margaritama on July 05, 2009
    wow - that was so clever...no great battle scene, no terrible bloodshed; instead he went the way all tyrants do - quietly, decisively and firmly. Brava.

    I see Hermione fell for Draco -- I didn't miss that look.
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  • From dragongirl on July 05, 2009
    Love your metaphors and chess comparison on the action. Simple amazing.... Keep them coming....
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  • From kazfeist on June 27, 2009
    I'm so glad you've updated....I had to go through three pages to find you, though. Sounds like the game is almost up. Can't wait for the end moves. :D
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  • From nowgolden on June 18, 2009
    this is great! :) can't wait to hear more!
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  • From kiekie21606 on June 16, 2009
    i love this story please please please up date :D
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  • From goldiducks on June 13, 2009
    wow i love your writing! but you rushed over the goodstuff at the end. :P
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  • From mlui on June 13, 2009
    4: Fantastic chapter! I like how he finally explained through chess and she understands. I'm glad Harry is alive (hope he's okay!). =)
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  • From jaceni50 on June 13, 2009
    I like this story a lot and can't wait to find out more of how this all came about. Great characters. :)
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