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Reviews for Adjustment

By : starstruck86
  • From Severus1snape on March 28, 2015
    this is truly awsome, and funny as hell!
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  • From HarryVik on November 10, 2009
    i just started reading the second chapter and Voldy is still alive. It is so quiet and peaceful i for one thought the war was over.
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  • From LadyZombie on October 15, 2009
    Just got through with Adjustment. Hmmm, let's see here...

    Blowing the folks away with a bombshell, two actually, gay and shacking up...check.

    Rather premature first lover's quarrel...check.

    Getting mum's acceptance...check.

    Having to meet the fam...check.

    Lots of really hot, nasty sex...double check.


    Nope. Don't think you've missed anything. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2009
    I really love Harry's personality here. He sounds so cool.
    Any chance you'll write something w/ Draco & Harry in it.
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  • From ANON - AAne on July 10, 2009
    You made a lot of changes w/ Snape and I can't believe that it actually sound so believable. I'm really glad that they're not isolated form everybody.
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  • From ANON - abbicee on June 17, 2009
    So having read Dreams I had to read this story next. It was nice to see that despite having decided they do have a future together they still have, well, adjustments to make in living with another person and sharing space. I'm glad to see that even when they argue and hurt each other they continue to talk things out, eventually that is, instead of letting bad feelings fester. It's nice to see that Molly is willing to try as is most of the rest of the family. Remus and Severus? I'm sure the background of that would make an interesting story. I'm glad to see that Severus and Ron's relationship is flexible and that it's not always the same person on top as it were. I admit submissive Severus is a kink of mine so I liked seeing Severus take that position and I'm pleased that he's willing to give into Ron also. The ending was hilarious.
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on June 12, 2009
    Another truly wonderful fic. Not everything goes smoothly in a relationship, especially for two people with so much emotional baggage, and hot tempers to match. The scene of the fight was especially touching, and realistic. It is often the smallest things, like an offhand comment which one doesn't even think about, which trigger the most horrible shouting matches.

    And, furthermore, I found most amusing Severus's comments to himself while being 'introduced' to his boyfriend's family.

    Thank you for sharing!
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