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Reviews for Black Rose

By : abalin2009
  • From ANON - Boocat on March 31, 2013
    I'm sorry about your foot and hope that it is doing much better. I hope you haven't changed your mind about finishing this story. I find it very interesting so far.
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  • From ANON - nyada on April 17, 2011
    i just stumbled upon your story and i like the base of it but i am wondering if u are coming back to it any time soon?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2010
    Please continue!
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  • From danylee on June 19, 2009
    I really liked your first chapter. I hope your foot gets better soon and I'll be looking for chap. 2. :>
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  • From LaBibliographe on June 19, 2009

    Hello
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  • From angelnomiko on June 19, 2009
    that was a great start ... please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From Larrabee on June 18, 2009
    This story and plot line seems very interesting. But the grammar and spelling makes it difficult to read.

    I mean capitalization is very important, commas, spelling, etc...

    Best of luck.
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  • From voraciousreader on June 18, 2009
    Good luck and I hope your foot heals quickly.
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  • From OUFAN on June 18, 2009
    WOW!!!! Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on June 18, 2009
    OMG! I hope and pray that you are better soon. At least you don't have to worry about health insurance where you're at. I hope you don't anyway. As for being dyslexic, I understand. I myself am learning disabled and have to come up with multiple ways to get by. One of the issues I have is that I can't really see my mistakes. I know a lot of people have this. But I found a solution of sorts. I have my computer read my writing to me that way I can hear the mistakes. It's amazing. I love my computer all the more because of this. That and spell check. I thank god everyday for that. I wouldn't be able to function without it. And seeing as I am a writer that would be bad. Take care of yourself. Your health comes first. I hope you're better soon.
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on June 18, 2009
    I commend you for giving writing fanfiction a try. As you said, this does need work, but it's nothing that you can't see to yourself. First of all something that you may not like hearing, go to summer school if you can. This can only benefit you. There you can learn the grammar and, perhaps even, some of the spelling you need to know. Take in your story idea and even what you've worked on to that point. It would be your project as it were and it will make learning that much more enjoyable. Next, and please don't get upset by me asking, but did you read the books or see the movies? If you haven't read the books, do so. Even if you have, do so again. The reason I'm saying this is two fold. One, you'll become familiar with some spelling, but proper grammar as well. And the second reason is that it will help you to get to know the characters better. You have a good idea here, but your characterization needs work. By getting to know the characters better, you will be able to write about them better as well. Even what they might write in a letter can be influenced by what you know or think you know about them. Check them out from the library or if you own them great, but either way do try to read them. You also might want to consider researching. Go to Wikipedia and read up about the different stories, characters, plots, etc... This again can only help, as it will give you a firmer understanding of the world you are writing about. Good luck and remember never give up. The only bad things are giving up or never trying at all.
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  • From ANON - annmarie on June 18, 2009
    great start looking forward to reading more
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on June 18, 2009
    It's interesting, that's for sure. If you have problems, I'd recommend a good word processing program and a beta, that generally does the trick for me!
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  • From diamondhelen on June 18, 2009
    I like the idea, Lucius stalking Hermione at a young age is kinda twisted but could make a good story. If it's the beginning of 6th year she's almost 17 according to canon though, not 15. Also you should think about a beta to help with your grammar, things like not capitalizing people's names make your writing seem quite childish. I hope you don't think I'm being harsh, I'm just trying to help because I think the idea has potential.
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