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Reviews for Chocolate and Wings

By : vaire
  • From dracoharry4life on July 07, 2009
    That was great. Emmett is way better off without snotty Rosalie.
    I would love to see a second chapter. Emmett could be made a permanent part of Harry and Marcus' relationship.
    They could even take down Rosalie off her high horse. Harry is the Savior of the Wizarding world. All those people Rosalie is so enamored with would drop her like a rock with the right words or shows of dislike from Harry Potter. Then she would have to go back to her old "boreing" normal routine, but, without Emmett, that she dropped.
    Or, I hope you at least write another story with this threesome. You could make it even hotter and bring in Edward. Maybe there was no Bella or Edward and she have parted. Edward could so make it a hot foursome. but then, jasper and Carlisle added could be hot also. Oh the love.
    Please write more or another story.
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  • From on June 20, 2009
    Simply amazing.
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