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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From Severus1snape on February 03, 2016
    Holy crap that was brilliant
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  • From ImladrisAura on April 20, 2015
    Beautiful!!!
    I love this story, it have a great amount of things to think about, looking around in the real world.
    Thank you for share this incredible fanfic. Your are an exelent writer.

    I'm sorry for any grammar or spell error, english is not my birth language
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  • From Annecia89 on March 20, 2015
    This story made me cry and made me smile. I enjoyed it.
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  • From jules3677 on May 04, 2013
    Finished reading the whole story. I must say that your writing improved throughout the story. I liked your premise of the marked Death Eaters being bonded to an unmarked wizard or witch. I admire how you developed the characters of Severus & Harry, especially as they grew to heal each other of past torments. You did well with replacing the "bogeyman" with Single, that was a smart plot move. I had a fun time reading your story. Thankyou.
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  • From ANON - Amy on November 25, 2012
    I had plans yesterday. I had Christmas shopping to do, library books to return, a child to feed. Instead I found this fic at 8 in the morning and stayed in reading it all day, stopping only to feed said child. I finally finished it at 1am and I was gutted it had come to an end. I loved this story so much, at the start I had no idea where it was going and was pleasantly surprised by the twists and turns it took. You delved just enough into each characters psyche to explain why they behaved the way they did, and it was great that you weren't afraid to deal with uncomfortable issues. This is definitely one of my favourite fics (which says something since I'm more a Drarry girl!) and I am looking forward to seeing what else you've written =)
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  • From ANON - mysticalwarrior on October 28, 2012
    i have to say that this story is awesome you have done an awesome job writing the story......i hope that your other stories is as good or better than this one. keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - runiechica on October 09, 2012
    This story is amazing. :) I don't usually go for the mpreg stories, but once I started this I couldn't stop. It was sad and beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Shh on December 08, 2011
    What a fantastically wonderful story - thanks for the amazing plot, great details, and rich characters!!! I LOVED IT!
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  • From Leowardelf on December 01, 2011
    Hi there,

    I just wanted to let you know that I just read all three of your stories and loved them! They seriously distracted me from my Nano so that was not as good but still. I'm sad to see that you have no new story yet but somehow I don't think I have to worry???
    Hope to see more from you soon, I'll be checking back on you...

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  • From Kalendral9 on November 28, 2011
    I am so glad that it was a happy ending... This is a great story that I'll come back and read again... this time without the long wait between chapters ^_^ K
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  • From countesszero on October 27, 2011
    Just one word! (I hope you still read your reviews ;)

    I noticed that at least when I click on the description of your story I can't find Mpreg warnings (or any warnings at all). To me it doesn't matter since I love Mpreg, Slave!Snape and Bottom!Snape but I thought maybe you could consider putting up warnings? I think some readers don't want to read Mpreg (or Botttom!Snape) stories. This way your lovely story would draw the right crowd of readers :)
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  • From countesszero on October 26, 2011
    Yes, what a romp! I enjoyed this tale a lot! And thank you for sticking to it until the very end! I am sure at some point it must have been tempting to desert it! I wish you much luck with your original fics!
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  • From MalfoysBitch on October 19, 2011
    omg! I cant believe this story has come to an end! loved it from start to finish! feel free to add a chapter every now and then!
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  • From ANON - lockheart on October 13, 2011
    I am so happy and so so sad. I have been reading this story since the very beginning and I am so happy that everyone got their happy ending. But I am so sad that it is over. Congratulations on a great story. THis is probably one of the better stories I have read on here. I loved the plot and the angst and the happy parts. I love the ending but am still a little sad to see it come to an end.
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  • From Aline on October 13, 2011
    Well, I must say this was an original plot, disturbing sometimes but kept me interested and wanting to know what happened next. Good Fic.

    By the way, this site has a section for original stories, or there is fictionPress.com, I hope you continue writing.
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