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Reviews for Spellbound

By : MysticWitchRini
  • From tinkita on June 25, 2009
    Great chapter! I hope you'll update soon!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 24, 2009
    Nice chapter.
    Draco's funny when bothering Tom on the phone.
    I'm glad Ginny's no longer in the picture anymore, she really annoyed me. UGH!
    Keep going!
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  • From FragileRose7 on June 24, 2009
    Lovee it!! You write amazingg! ja ne and good luck! =]]
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on June 24, 2009
    great story and I can not wait for tom and Harry to get together!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 24, 2009
    Oh wow what an update, Draco was definitely amusing here and I loved it. Oooooh I just cant wait for that unpacking they are going to do, I'm sure its going to be interesting. Eeeeeeeeeeeeeh I am just happy about this story, cant wait for more

    Sorry for not making any sense here
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  • From ANON - lilywood on June 24, 2009
    I really like this story!! And you update fast, that is great!
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  • From pointoftears on June 24, 2009
    Howdy! I just stumbled onto your story and decided to give it a shot. I had never read a Harry/Tom fic before, but I am glad that I decided to try your story out. I like the way you portrayed the characters. I also thought it was funny that the school's mascot was the wizards.
    I like the way Tom and Harry's relationship is progressing. I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - varjo on June 23, 2009
    This is a very interesting story and you write quite well, you just have a few grammars that are quite annoying to someone who reads books and such in english regularly.

    For one, I think you ment FOOTball, when you wrote kick ball, and second, here's a piece of your story as you wrote it and the same piece after I corrected it:

    ORIGINAL:

    "He walked out of gym without it. And i thought i would give it back to him on Monday." Harry said as Ron grinned.

    "Hey lets go through it." Ron said as Hermione hit him in the back of the head.

    "Ron now that is just rude. Riddle may be a cold evil monster but he wouldnt go through your stuff." Hermione said as Harry blinked.

    "What do you mean 'monster'?" Harry asked as Ron looked at him.

    "It's why he avoid that bastard like the plauge. And why you should avoid him aswell." Ron said as Harry looked very confused.

    "Harry... Tom Riddle is the school vampire." Hermione said as Harry felt his jaw drop at the news that he was very attracted to someone who could kill him with a hickey.

    CORRECTED:

    "He walked out of gym without it. And I thought I would give it back to him on Monday." Harry said as Ron grinned.

    "Hey, lets go through it." Ron said as Hermione hit him in the back of the head.

    "Ron! Now that is just rude. Riddle may be a cold, evil monster but he wouldn't go through your stuff." Hermione said as Harry blinked.

    "What do you mean 'monster'?" Harry asked as Ron looked at him.

    "It's why we avoid that bastard like the plague. And why you should avoid him as well." Ron said as Harry looked very confused.

    "Harry... Tom Riddle is the school vampire." Hermione said as Harry felt his jaw drop at the news that he was very attracted to someone who could kill him with a hickey.

    Notice the difference? When you write anywhere something like 'I'm gay', you write the I as capital and don't forget the throwmarks. If you need a beta, you can reach me at elohopeaa84@luukku.com, but please make sure to notify me first and wait for a reply.

    Keep up the good work and I'm serious, I can beta this story for you if you need help. You only need to ask.
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  • From ladyedgecombe on June 23, 2009
    Love the story, hope you continue with it.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 23, 2009
    Ok I couldnt help but smile at the end of chapter 3, it was a great line. That kiss was just hot and I wonder how Harry will confront Tom about what he heard

    Love the update
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  • From vaire on June 23, 2009
    *rolls on floor laughing* The school vampire *snort* I wouldnt mind be bitten by him *leer* Interesting chapter, some excellent character interaction. Cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 22, 2009
    Tom's a vamp! *le gasp* At least that explains his REALLY pale skin, etc.
    I love the motorcycle! Harry blushes so much! aww
    Good chapter.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on June 22, 2009
    GREAT STORY!
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  • From tinkita on June 22, 2009
    Another great chapter! Good descriptions and I like how you develop the personalities of Harry and Tom.
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  • From ANON - Arbre d'Orme on June 21, 2009
    Very interesting story, I liked how you set the plot, and I am curious as how Harry's high school years will be. I can't wait for the next update, so I hope it comes soon.

    Have a good day,
    Orme
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