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Reviews for Alone With Death

By : scarletladyy
  • From WesleyY7 on July 01, 2009
    This is an interesting one-shot that I would have loved to see expanded to a multi-chapter story. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed it. Very dark and was very shocking. However, there was so much in the story, I wanted more! Draco seemed to be conflicted; showing a soft side to Hermione when they were alone, yet cruel in front of others. Since your profile indicated you are a huge femmeslash fan, I kept expecting Narcissa (or Georgia the maid) to take pleasure with their new slave, but that never happened. It's an AU with Bella being alive, yet Hermione's torture was referenced. What happened with the war? When we've only seen house-elves, why have a human girl as a maid? Does she have a story? Did Harry and Ron even know their best friend was missing? Again, I enjoyed the story, but it left me wanting so much more. :)
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