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Reviews for Unexpected Affections

By : MysticWitchRini
  • From Morgana on May 22, 2014
    Oh wow,James really is a total twat. Poor Lucius...
    I do hope he treated Lilly better!
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on June 12, 2010
    Already a fan, Darlin'! You don't gotta tell me twice! Love this little Harry/Lucius bit you did. Gotta love the Dark with the Light.
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 06, 2010
    Can't wait for chapter 9!!!
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  • From DarkKat on January 19, 2010
    Hey, like this story, but is it finished???
    If not, where is the rest?
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  • From hauntoftwilight on December 12, 2009
    I loved this story! I adore this pair!!!!! I felt bad for Harry when he was once again compared to his father's past, but I loved how it ended.
    twilight_mouri@yahoo.com
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  • From pointoftears on August 04, 2009
    Yay! The saying goes that 'it is better to end with a bang than a whimper', but after reading your last chapter for this story, I think we can modify that to, 'its better to end with banging and whispers'. (People boo at lame joke) Ok, ok, ok. Sorry. Had to say it.
    Great ending. I was not expecting Harry to be the agressor in the end. Nice surprise. Huzzah for the silk tie!


    *Looks sheepish* sorry about not getting the chapters. I have been busy with a new job and it slipped my mind. I will try to get them done and send them to you this morning. I'm sorry for the delay.
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  • From JJay on August 01, 2009
    I really like where this story is going, and I look forward to reading more of it. However, I would suggest being more careful with your grammar. for example, make sure you capitalise 'I' every time, rather than just at the beginning of sentences. also, some of your sentences could flow better. A good way to check the flow of your sentences is to read them aloud to yourself, that way you can tell whether they make sense or not, or if you can change them to make them sound better!

    I hope these tips help you to improve an already great story, and I look forward to the next chapter!!!
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  • From pointoftears on July 29, 2009
    ohhhhh, me thinks the next chapter is going to be quite steamy!
    Will Lucius tie Harry up with his Hair ribbon again? Hope so. *Crosses fingers and toes*
    very nice interaction. I am glad Lucius came clean with Harry. Huzzah for emotional understanding!

    On a beta note - I will copy this and work on it and get it back to you as soon as I can! :)
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  • From ANON - BVB on July 28, 2009
    I LOVE this fic. You're right, I havent read many good Harry/Lucius fics, definitely none as sweet as this. Keep going, this is brilliant.
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  • From ANON - paganwoman on July 28, 2009
    Yummy, but what a place to end it!!
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  • From ANON - gravilove19 on July 20, 2009
    I can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From Elphaba on July 19, 2009
    Oh poor Luc :(
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  • From ladyedgecombe on July 18, 2009
    You know, I could actually see Lucius getting all death eater and punching some muggle that dared to take something that belonged to him. The guy just oozes sex. Nice chapter.
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  • From ANON - paganwoman on July 18, 2009
    Sorry if I was misunderstood, the only flame was the one that lit my last cigarette! Love the story and Lucius in a CW bar was a great visual. Kept thinking Urban Cowboy. Truly, love the story and more cookies (and brownies) for you!
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  • From pointoftears on July 18, 2009
    First of all - Ha! Speaking as a gal from the west myself,
    I must say the image of Harry and Lucius in cowboy hats is hilarious!
    I have been to many bars like that in my time. Hehehe.

    Heck yea! Lucius finally stood up and told Harry he liked him and was simply afraid.
    So sad though that he got into the fight! I hope he is okay.

    If you want, you can always send me chapters before you post. (~da beta)
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