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Reviews for An Unexpected Saviour

By : MattSnow
  • From ANON - red on October 14, 2009
    good start
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  • From anniea on October 12, 2009
    oooooo fresh meat, just kidding, can't say that i like the story yet, too soon to tell! update soon
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  • From ANON - TheSiner on September 25, 2009
    Are you making fun of us? What's this?
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  • From Elfin69 on July 25, 2009
    I cannot wait to see who he meets and hope that he finally gets someone who actually cares for him. Please update again soon.
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  • From alma on July 20, 2009
    Good start!!
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  • From wiccanmama on July 14, 2009
    This seems like it could be interesting. Waiting for any new installment with bated breath.
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  • From AlphazSlut on July 10, 2009
    Hi! Sorry... I know I commented earlier and you haven't updated so there should be no reason for me to comment again... :) But i would really really like for you to continue.... preferably soon.:) And If you ever need a Beta or anything just leave a comment on one of my stories and i'll be over-joyed to do it for ya. lol, can you tell im just trying to hurry along the update? tehe. sorry, im a huuuuuge fg/hp fan!! In fact i think ill go write one right now (Which will actually be my very first one) and dedicate it to you! why? i dont know. but let's be spontaneous shall we? hahaha..... Sorry, waaaaay to much RockStar today.. :)
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  • From JtheChosen1 on July 10, 2009
    Very brief yet stimulating! Keep up the great work!
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  • From AlphazSlut on July 10, 2009
    Good start! I can't wait to see what kinda trouble Har-bear's going to get himself into. :) Maybe the Big Bad wolf actually saves Little Red in the woods and we've been lied to all along? hmmm, well see. haha. I can't wait for the first chapter! Update soon please!
    XoXo,
    Kay
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  • From shadygrl on July 09, 2009
    Interesting beginning -- would like to see more, and maybe longer installments if possible!
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  • From amysds on July 09, 2009
    It could be good - everyone loves a good HPFG. But your next chapter needs to be significantly longer, or many people (including me) won't bother to read it any further into the story. Also I would edit the word crush and change it to boyfriend. Cause if a crush is making out with someone then in hurts, but doesn't mean they betrayed you like you implied. If it's the BOYFRIEND of a couple years...that's different!

    Also it would be cool if Ron (shallow git) was making out with her because Harry wouldn't put out!
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