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Reviews for Slave of the Dark

By : Snapeslittlebat
  • From ANON - Cremilyayton on June 02, 2013
    Oh my goddd.ddddd.d.d.d.
    PLEASE update this soon, it's ridiculously naughty and fucking hot as hell. Reviewing is really awkward cuz it's weird putting into words how hot that was, but I assure you I bet me and many others enjoyed it.
    I don't normally review stories, but this totally needs one, as you soooooooo need to update this!
    Don't go easy on the kinks and smut ;) it's just what we like.
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  • From Jessica86 on June 15, 2011
    I love the story. Don't know why, but I really love to see poor Harry being humiliated by Lucius. I really hope that you'll continue on this story soon.
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  • From Stevo1711 on September 25, 2010
    I am Hooked....and anyone who is hooked on a good story...well needless to say I want more. This is brilliant and I can't wait for more and please keep it going please
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on June 12, 2010
    Good beginning.
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  • From Luvs2read88 on June 02, 2010
    I enjoy reading this story and i can't wait to find out what happens next. You asked people to help you with grammar and incorrect spelling so i figured i would help you out.
    1)"It's all right, you did wonderfully." the Death Eater stroked Harry's head like a perent would. perent---parent.
    2)Trying not to make any moves so not to desturb... desturb---disturb.
    3)Without the fire..., but he remaind still. remaind---remained.
    4)Just as he tought about getting up.... tought---thought.
    5)I like it when... these noughty things... noughty---naughty.
    6)Cold fingers started to play with his pearcing... pearcing---piercing.
    7)"You make such delocious noises." delocious---delicious.
    8)blund object lave... lave---leave


    Keep up the great work though.
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  • From ANON - moiramctaggart on May 21, 2010
    Your story is pretty good so far. I do request that you use the spell check function before you post and read over it once to be sure that the words aren't connected together and misplaced. The spelling errors are very distracting and get progressively worse as the story continues. Otherwise good job.
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  • From mrequecky on April 06, 2010
    Yay, looved :D
    Achja, Gratulation zur bestandenen Pruefung!!!
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  • From Harcopotfoy on April 06, 2010
    Oh. So deliciously wrong! Can't wait for more
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  • From Eloradanin on November 24, 2009
    please update soon, i really like this story _^
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  • From mrequecky on November 03, 2009
    OMG! LOooved! I hope you write more!!!
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  • From someonenotme on October 31, 2009
    I like so far, but I also don't think Harry should give in so easily. I mean, why would he submit to pain through fear of pain, especially considering he's only been punished once?? Plus, I just like the whole 'training' process. :0)
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  • From Eloradanin on October 31, 2009
    yay an update, keep it going plz
    ^_^
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  • From hauntoftwilight on September 03, 2009
    please let me know when you update.
    twilight_mouri@yahoo.com
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  • From helga1967 on August 22, 2009
    Interesting please continue
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  • From BleedingHearts on August 02, 2009
    Poor Harry. This seem good so far. Keep going.
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