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Reviews for fun with a time turner

By : johnnyobinome
  • From Nightshade220 on March 23, 2010
    That...is so...BRILLIANT!!!! I TOTALLY love it!!! I'm surprised no one thought of it before!!! It's fantastic!!! Can there be a sequel? Please?
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  • From custodiawolf on September 23, 2009
    Okay, right, one problem..

    One of them would know exactly what happened..

    Hermione would know that she was going to do it, because the other Hermione would of come earlier and done it with her :P You portrayed it as neither knew that the other was going to arrive or that neither was expecting it.

    Another problem is that it was hard to figure out which Hermione was Hermione. Apart from that - good job. :)
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  • From garsdal on September 13, 2009
    always wondered if she did someting like that at some point:D
    or even make it a party of 4?
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  • From AnnaLouise on August 05, 2009
    I like the concept for this, perhaps mostly because it's something different.

    I found this to be very readable, though sadly a little short for my liking.

    Do continue! : )
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