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Reviews for The Fallen

By : Phantomhive
  • From Darkened_Rose on August 15, 2013
    Read to the end. Kinda sad it is over. I would though like to know what happened to the order and Sirius black.
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  • From firebolt86 on December 18, 2010
    i loved it!!!!
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  • From HeartStar on April 24, 2010
    Very Nice Very nice indeed.
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  • From hauntoftwilight on December 17, 2009
    an interesting story
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  • From DeathDancer on October 13, 2009
    Your grammar is weak at some points, and downright confusing at others. Otherwise, it is quite sound.

    I must say that for an entire story to be written in the present tense is quite a unique way to write. You slipped a few times and reverted to past tense. You managed to pull off something that most authors would fail at spectacularly.

    The characters are most often than not in character, though the small lapses do make them seem more human. It's quite pleasant, actually.

    Death.
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