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Reviews for Blood's Magic

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  • From buttercup18 on September 13, 2009
    i just adore this fic:]
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  • From ANON - kirallie on September 07, 2009
    Great story!! TOm as a vampire? Interesting. I thought if you were marked by two vampires the one with more marks completly over ruled the other? Didnd't that happne with Anita? How will the AB gang react to Harry?
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  • From ANON - melanie on September 04, 2009
    I have no idea where the rest of this story is going to go but I certainly hope it continues. The only word to discribe how I felt when I got to the end of this chapter is nausated ... that there wasn't anymore. Because i have to hope of doing what you do (writing stories) I try to have patience while waiting for the next chapter ..... sometims it harder then others depending on how good the story is and others damn mear impossible..like now. Iam a hugh fan of Anita Blake I have all her books so when combining them both is amazing and not enough people do it in my opnion, but like I said I wouldn't be able to either so I try not to complain too much :).. Please don't stop.

    Melanie
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  • From ANON - Nixie on September 04, 2009
    I love it!!! Please update soon I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - brightsun89 on September 04, 2009
    I love it!! I love it and I can't wait for more, please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Jade on August 30, 2009
    Excellent start
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  • From ANON - Harryetty on August 30, 2009
    Awesome start,loved the way you went through the cannon parts without rehashing them while still showing what had happened.
    looking forwards to more.
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  • From PSchri87 on August 30, 2009
    Hi again. I was re-reading your story, because it draws me in so well. I wanted to re-iterate how interesting and well-done your plot and characters are.

    However, I noticed some spelling mistakes, mainly where you use a word that sounds correct, but means something else.
    Examples:
    -"If you feel and righted yourself...", I think you mean 'fell' instead of 'feel'
    -"now that our lives our connected by an unbreakable bond", I think the second 'our' should be 'are'
    -"well in you world anyways", should be 'your world'
    -"And your welcome for the charm", should be 'you're', as in the contracted form of 'you are'
    -"tone it down a bit and try a mimic my old way...", I think you mean 'try to mimic' or 'try and mimic'
    -"He preformed the three forbidden curses" should be 'performed'

    Other mistakes are where you miss a word:
    -"I would have asked you resign", it should be 'you to resign'
    -"once you have matured you be beautiful", should be 'you will be beautiful'

    I'm sorry if it sounds like I am overly critical, these are just small mistakes, but they are distracting sometimes, or momentarily confusing. Maybe take a few days after you write it, and re-read it. Often, because you know what you want it to say, you see it as it should be, not as it is. That happens to me often. I really like your writing, though, and your imagination.

    I also have a question, or a remark, rather. Since the Traveler can't be killed when he resides in another's body, is the body he is in now, on his way to St. Louis, his real body? Has Harry ever seen his real body?

    Thanks again to both of you for such an excellent story! I enjoy how Harry's letters were rambling, like a teenagers, and the Traveler's are shorter, more to the point, and sound more mature. They offer the readers a glimpse of how their relationship developed. I am hopeful you will continue your story, and am excited to read more.
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  • From Georginna on August 29, 2009
    Love it! I can't wait to read more. This was a very interesting beginning, and I have a feeling it is about to get more so.
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  • From ANON - The Unknown on August 28, 2009
    Love the story please update soon, this is one of the best crossover I have read and there is only one chapter so I know will just get better.
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  • From ANON - Lyra on August 28, 2009
    wow that was one hell of a long prologue :P but I quite enjoyed it. please write more :)
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  • From bittsweetmis on August 26, 2009
    I really like it so far. I haven't actually ready any Anita Blake stories yet, but have read a few other crossovers with Harry Potter (before they got banned from ff.net) and I really like this so far and can't wait to read more (must find 1st anita blake book...)
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  • From alma on August 26, 2009
    OMG!!!! That was a totally awesome chapter!!! I loved it.
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  • From ANON - Stef on August 25, 2009
    Interesting. I really like what you have so far. I think it is a great start for an amazing story. I hope you are able to update soon.
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  • From ANON - ManaHrafn on August 25, 2009
    Great story you got in the making here, hope to see more soon
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