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Reviews for Invitation

By : starstruck86
  • From Severus1snape on May 13, 2015
    OMG this is so romeo and Juliet ;-(
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  • From Severus1snape on May 11, 2015
    OMG this is one of the funniest stories with this pairing... not even halfway through ch 1 and I have to review.


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  • From ANON - moon-halo90 on September 24, 2013
    It is a beautiful story but I am in a public place and everyone is looking at me like I'm crazy sobbing my eyes out! I don't know who I feel more sorry for Ron or Severus though I'm not surprised Ron would rather die then be without Severus.
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  • From ANON - kex on January 18, 2013
    I'm in tears, feck, seriously, beautiful story but the ending is so sad..
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  • From ANON - CSIGH on July 14, 2011
    To say you havce woven quite the story, would be to indicate your work to be less then it truly is. I have read this work, and dispite a lot of times where I would have done something different. It is truly well done, please do give the final parts to it. I want to know this plesantly happy ending you are talking about.
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  • From countesszero on December 04, 2010
    i liked this story, because i am fond of this pairing - although it reminded me a bit of a snarry. incidentally your harry reminded me of how ron is written in many fics :D

    i think what i liked most was the incident with the letter and the owl. for some reasons it was the most vivid image you created.


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  • From ANON - Bo on November 15, 2010
    I read.
    Cried all through the last two chapters.
    Just want to die now.
    Yah...really.
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  • From FinniganFlames on March 25, 2010
    I love you, but in way that I want to kill myself.
    Is that alright?
    This was beautiful and in my opinon (this being the last of your fics for me to read) that you are the best write on this site.
    Completely adored this and couldn't stop reading, which is probably why it is half 5 in the morning.

    LMS

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  • From ANON - blah on November 06, 2009
    WTF?! That ending sucked freaking balls. Pfft....to write this entire story and then to fuck it all up with that ending. Jesus...
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  • From RyaResshi on October 06, 2009
    I can't even be mad at you for it. I screamed and cursed and through things when ron kissed lavender, cried for a week and a half when Sirius died, but for some reason, this story is different.
    It's brilliant, and I don't think you need to worry about a warning. You write very well. I could say it was beautiful, but it wasn't really. I could say it amazing and wonderful and all sorts of things, but they'd all be wrong or incomplete. All that can really be said, is well done.
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  • From CruelHero on October 05, 2009
    *Glares at you* That was evil. In a way, though, I think it was fitting but I would have loved if it didn't end this way. Ron would make a brilliant vampire with his paler skin, his striking red hair and bright blue eyes. *sighs* Now I have to try hard not to be sad.
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  • From ANON - Pinktarg on September 15, 2009
    It's been a long time since a story has held my interest the way this one has. Ron'a character is not usually one I find worth the effort as even Rowling has depicted him in a somewhat shallow, undeveloped manner. However, I was completely absorbed with all characters in your little drama. Unlike my experience with most fan fictions, I had no problem reconciling Rowling's original characterizations with your alternative development. The tone of your writing is poignant. I have seldom been moved to tears by any story. I both thank and curse you.
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  • From winspearcj on September 13, 2009
    this story was so sweet and sad you should definitely write even though it made me cry this is now my number favorite fanfic and i.ve read alot of them and this one touches me the most
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  • From ANON - morganabythesea on September 11, 2009
    Oh, that just hurt!!! Superbly written, but painful. You made me cry too. :-)
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  • From ANON - kai on September 11, 2009
    i can't believe you ended it like that. that was too sad.
    i didn't think everything would work out perfectly but i didn't think you'd kill him ;_;
    OMG!!!

    i still loved it, but now you have to write a new snape/ron fic, one with a happy ending!!! just to make up for how angsty and sad this one was!!
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