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Reviews for Avenging Fire

By : LadyZombie
  • From tambrathegreat on October 29, 2009
    I have a freaking cold or something, so it took me a while to get through the chapter. Sorry, I wanted to give a great, elucidating review, but my nose is just about as sore as my brain right now.

    Loved the way Nyx played Hagrid, and the respect she showed him. I don't think many people show him that much respect for his intellectual acumen. I love Hagrid, and I'm glad he decided to share his ideas on Scary Mary with her.

    Snape is becoming intrigued. Good. He needs someone to make him want to survive the war. Here's hoping that someone will be Helena.

    Yeah, your fic would be well-received on that community. We actually just started it, but so far, we've had a good response. OC's are always a tough sell because of the Mary Sue factor. Your Helena is definitely not a Sue. She's someone I'd want to know.

    Thanks for the great update.

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  • From tambrathegreat on October 28, 2009
    Well, I may be the only one reviewing, but I'm sure you have other readers. This site is notorious for not reviewing stories that don't have a great deal of smut. Don't know why.

    I love the interaction between Snape and Helena. They are just so at odds with each other, and so perfectly matched in stubborness. Honestly, the way you write him, I can almost hear his voice. It's really lovely.

    I also love Helena's character. She is forthright and pretty open. I wonder what Snape is thinking of her at this point. I'm sure it's not all twitchy irritation and anger. She has to have caught his attention simply because she's not really afraid of his reputation or his demeanor. Thanks for sharing this.

    Oh, and have you thought of putting this up on fanfic.net? Another writer and I have a community that this would fit in, for unusual parings and cannon characters with OC's. If you do have it there already, let me know your pen name there and I would be happy to showcase your story. WIB too. You know how much I love that freaking crazy story. (I still can hear Sirius screaming, and it brings tears of joy to my eye.) You can contact me either through my gmail account (tambrathegreat@gmail.com) or on the site. Just type my penname in the search.
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  • From AlabasterPrincess on October 27, 2009
    Hagrid and his bike love, lol! I imagine he misses Sirius's bike terribly.

    Nice name for the owl :P and so sensitive a creature! I'm surprised Sev's attitide and countenance didn't make Queequeg pass out without the need for a Petrificus Totalus! gotta love him tho :D
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  • From tambrathegreat on October 14, 2009
    I'm glad that Helena won't be intimidated. I hate stories where people belly- up to Snape. The description of the bureaucrat was hilarious. I think there is a personality test that people have to take to get such jobs. If they are disagreeable, petty tyrants, and slow to comprehend, then the test says it's okay for them to work in the DMV, Welfare or any number of offices that will put their talents to best use. Thanks you for such a great mental image.

    I look forward to updates on both these stories.
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 27, 2009
    I like the last line. She had been Snape. Very funny.

    I do wonder when Helena is going to discover that Severus is suffering from PTSD, and what her reaction will be to him. He's a prime candidate for medication, as she has already observed.

    Thanks for updating this story. I was looking forward to it all weekend.
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 18, 2009
    I did enjoy the chapter. Sorry I can't be more specific. I'm suffering from the side-effects of my migraine meds. Great job as usual. And yeah, I don't really want to read a threesome fic with those three either. It is a squicktimonious thought.
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 18, 2009
    Aw, I'm sorry your rating was lowered. Don't worry about it. On this site, it seems that if there is no PWP, some people are real jerks. Maybe if you had a threesome between Dumbles, Smythe, and Cornelius Fudge they would be satisfied. ;b

    I liked the chapter and didn't feel like you had blown it off. Thanks for the update!
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 13, 2009
    I can't wait to see what the trained psychologist makes of Snape's situation. He's obviously got at least some lingering neurosis from his childhood. Lovely chapter, and sorry about the amounts of gross you are producing. My allergies are manifesting as aches and fatigue. You have it much worse.


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  • From tambrathegreat on September 03, 2009
    Oh, good chapter. I enjoyed that Smythe was a little person. Not at all what I was expecting. Great job.
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  • From AlabasterPrincess on August 30, 2009
    brilliant! I love it! the only problem is I was planning on writing a story with a similar premise. oh well, one off hte list, about 50 to go ;P
    seriously, a good story, keep it up.
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  • From tambrathegreat on August 30, 2009
    So, Alexandria is finally settling in, and the Trio has decided to adopt the boy. (sorry benadryl is chasing names out of my head at the moment.) When will Snape come around and see that Helena is a woman? Or has he already, and thinks she's out of his league? Interesting thought, that.

    I look forward to more.


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  • From tambrathegreat on August 29, 2009
    I love her ability! Who wouldn't want to throw fireballs when they were under pressure? I can't wait for the next chappie.

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  • From tambrathegreat on August 28, 2009
    I'm so intrigued by this story. I hope that Snape is still around after the 'shadowy figures' aka Death Eaters see our heroine and her two charges.

    Great job. Also, do you post your other fiction anywhere? If so, where? I would love to read it.

    If you reply, you can reach me at tambrathegreat@gmail.com
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  • From coopershawk on August 27, 2009
    I'd like to see more. Thanks for writing it.
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