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Reviews for Seraphim Beneath The Christmas Tree

By : starstruck86
  • From talley on September 27, 2009
    Man, It takes me awhile to read and I've only had time late in the evenings and the two chapters prior I had actually fallen asleep reading desperately trying to stay awake to finish. I have loved the evolution of Ron and Snape's relationship. Adored the brother bonding. Laughed and sighed at Severus with his stubborness. Awwwwed at George and his life and taking care of Ron. My stomach clinched along with Ron's heart at Severus' words. I can't believe how quickly and deeply I can get entangled in the universe you write. I don't want this to be the end. Awaits more but wonders about the way these two will decided to live as now a "bonded" couple?
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on September 27, 2009
    **Snoopy Dance of Complete and Utter Happiness**

    They said the words!!!! Oh yeah, oh yeah!!!!

    What!!! Only two more chapters?!? But, but, but :( Okay, but can Herms get her butt kicked (just saying, left at the altar would be nice *blinks innocently*)

    Wondering if you have any ideas about the next Ron and Severus story? Umm, interesting if Ron was a single parent and Severus was his child's teacher...or what ever genius idea you come up with next


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  • From abbicee on September 26, 2009
    Whew! What a ride that was, more stomach churning than that Space Mountain thing at Disneyland. But it ended well with words of love and hot sex. Yay for George. He deserves a happy ending too. I sure hope Ron's nurse or whatever realizes that Ron is well and truely taken. Moulin Rouge? Of course, I love that movie, but when I tired to think of musical starcrossed lovers all I could come up with was West Side Story. Must be a sign of my age.
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 26, 2009
    Good. They needed to get that out of the way. Severus and Ron were both skirting the issue of their feelings, and it's about time they both admitted they love each other. Oh, and yeah, that was really hot-making at the end. Lovely.
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on September 26, 2009
    When you promise the infamous Snape temper, you *deliver* the famous Snape temper. Add to that Ron
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  • From ANON - mor on September 26, 2009
    YES!!! :-) Thank Merlin for George! I believe that boy deserves a chance at a happy ending. Wonderful as always. Your argument between Ron and Severus seemed so real a plausible for their characters that you even gave me a stomach ache. I'm so glad they worked it out, I feel so much better now. LOL Really, this story has been great, thanks again for sharing with us.
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  • From ANON - Sheree on September 26, 2009
    OMG I was in tears - Severus was so vicious (and perfect!)

    And the line about the lack of fireworks and rose petals was great - they were just sitting on the kitchen floor!

    What a shame this has to end ;)


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  • From ANON - kai on September 26, 2009
    i feel like this chapter was written solely for me and i love you for it. ^_^
    also that random dude in the bathroom was awesome!! and i love george in here, i feel for him so much and it just hurts that he knows that he'll never find anyone but that he's able to help ron pull his head out of his arse and get his man. great job there.

    also that love confession from both of them, oh god that was sheer awesomeness, i loved it too.

    and the make up sex! *whew* that was hot! so smexy!!

    update soon!!!
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  • From SeraphimeRising on September 26, 2009
    So lovely. I love the way you treated and expressed survivor's guilt. Now can we get George a little loving for being such a good big brother.

    Oh, I'm still waiting for Hermione's come-uppance :)
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  • From LadyZombie on September 25, 2009
    Oh and I sympathize with Ron's cold feet. I have Reynauld's and it makes your extremities go ice cold. Brrrr!
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  • From LadyZombie on September 25, 2009
    LOL @ Ron's girly spider scream. And as far as both of them being stubborn...typical men. ;)

    I was surprised with Sev's cousin renting his room out. As protective as she was, I figured she'd hold on to it for him.

    Oh, and 80's music is a blast!
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on September 25, 2009
    You do truly scare (and delight at the same time, quite a feat) me when you mention
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  • From abbicee on September 25, 2009
    What a neat way to say I love you and I'm so glad Severus was able to pick it up. It's too bad Severus' cousin was unable to hold his place for him, but I suppose this makes it easier for him to move in with Ron, if he can get over his pride that is. So, was the movie West Side Story?
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 25, 2009
    Another lovely offering. I just can't tell you how much I love this story. Ron and Severus just fit together. I do wonder what Snape's going to do to cock things up. I hope he doesn't go too far.
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on September 25, 2009
    lol...Ron did the Snoopy Dance...okay you called it the Victory Dance of Joy but still...Snoopy Dance to me :P

    Damn that Ron...stubborn sot!!!!

    Oooohhhhh...Severus in a temper...directed at Hermoine please!!!
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