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Reviews for A Night Out

By : wildtaz2go
  • From ANON - anonymous on January 09, 2012
    what language are you using? It vaguely resembles english...
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  • From ANON - Mae on August 11, 2011
    Spell-check desperately wants to be your friend.
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  • From hellangelhellina on October 28, 2010
    Interesting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2009
    Oh, and why would the broken ribs be a continuing problem? Poppy can fix bones in a second.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2009
    Nice premise but you seriously need a beta. There's a typo in every line.
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on September 27, 2009
    Severus's self-worth was always linked to his abilities and skills. And the fact that he doesn't know if he will ever be able to work, or even brew potions for recreational purposes, is going to be hard. Not only on himself, but also on Albus.
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  • From ANON - Barb on September 27, 2009
    Please Please get someone to check the spelling. Mussell is something you eat not a part of the body. Poppy wants him to stay not wont him to stay.


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  • From ANON - Barb on September 24, 2009
    It could be a good story but you really need to check the spelling.
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on September 23, 2009
    Albus - and here I speak, as most of us, by personal experience - must have passed the worse hours of his life, not knowing if Severus was going to make it at all or not.

    And it's really good that this chapter is longer.
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on September 22, 2009
    It seems like an interesting premise; my only complaint? That it's so short.
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