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Reviews for Rival Hearts

By : KohakuShadow
  • From Bloublibo on May 31, 2010
    AAAAAAAAAAW!
    Why have I never read a Seamus/ Victor fic before? Why have I never heard of this pairing before?!
    I think I might be in love with this pairing. Yes, totally.
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  • From HunterJumperLuvr on October 28, 2009
    I really enjoyed this story, one thing that I can find annoying with authors, is that the story is slow, however your stories I must say, are fast but not so fast that the story seems to be over in a matter of days... However, I'm going to suggest a beta, I'm willing if you need/want me to, because I noticed a few mistakes, that wouldn't take long to correct. My email should be on my profile, you can email me your questions, or whatever you want to do.

    Good Luck,
    Hunter
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  • From ANON - rose on October 12, 2009
    The stories that are the most fun for me are the stories that have pairings I never even thought possible but they are still so well written and enjoyable. I'm really happy that you have continued to write more stories after Wounds. I have to say that your writing has improved a lot. I didn't notice any blatant grammar or spelling mistakes, and the writing itself has a better flow to it. I really like the idea of Krum and Seamus, so I do hope that you get the sequel up soon. Thanks for sharing this, it was great!
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  • From ANON - arya on October 10, 2009
    That was a beautifully written story. but i hate sad endings. Those two have to get together in the sequel.
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