Click Here!

Reviews for Salvation

By : clairevictoria
  • From morningstorm70 on October 10, 2016

    Please update the post said the last chapter was done last year so looking forward to seeing what happens next 


    Report Review

  • From CapriaStar on February 22, 2016
    I love this story and hope you update again soon. One of the best written stories I've read.
    Report Review

  • From Innocent_fairy on January 12, 2016
    I really hope you finish this story its very good
    Report Review

  • From on September 19, 2015
    I read the first one and loved it. Enjoying this one too but I think the original was a hair better...or maybe it's my memory. It was a ways back. What is Percy thinking about?? What's wrong with him? How's Fred making out without George by his side all the time??
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sera21 on July 31, 2015
    Hey, been reading up to chapter 5 so far and really enoying it. I love Severus sister Solarin( although Serenity is mentioned once and then never again, wierd. You would think SEverus would have SOME memories of growing up with her but nope, just that one mention of another sister.)and enjoy Harrys interction with his daughter. I did think it was pretty wierd for Arthur to give Harry such an expensive gift. Raise or no raise, you would think he would want to save up to rebuild his home or support his teenage son and his 2 grandkids but nope, everybody is gonna sponge of sirius some more. Thats another point I was wondering about.Arthur works,Bill works, Charlie is usually working in Romania so now he is...not? Severus ...sells potions? maybe? While the others just hang around and take care of the kids and the house? Who is actually creating the income in this family ??? Are they all sponging off Sirius till kingdom come? Do you realize how expensive nappys are????
    Report Review

  • From on July 03, 2015
    Just all the chapters...this is not just a story but a saga! Events or feelings don't always mesh from chapter to chapter and there are sooo many new characters coming & going or some staying that I really have to concentrate when reading. It is a great intricate saga of a family, a big family, but a very very interesting one. Thoroughly enjoying it and anxious for more chapters.

    Report Review

  • From ANON - cztelnik on June 29, 2015
    They is certainly a lot going on in this chapter, what a bombshell they found in that diary. Lucius is still out there and emotionality is rampant throughout their family unit. Good thing they are all so adaptable.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - cztelnik on June 29, 2015
    I believe I've mentioned before I like the long chapters and lengthy story. It flows. Also, your depictions of situations tend to be very accurate. Specifically the Remus being under scene is an example, although it simply isn't possible to prepare for something like seeing your mate intubated and realizing you might not have the chance to say goodbye.

    There is a lot going on and more plot twists occurring every chapter but you still this up loose ends. Like another reviewer wrote- you build your stories like a house with a good foundation and framework.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - cztelnik on June 29, 2015
    Well a lot of things are happening and going on relationship wise but I'm glad they've got ways of support to be able to all stay together. Would have expected Harry to go stuff crazy by now. Actually considered Tonks and Sam as an item. An odd thing, there seems precious little information in JKR's or most fanfics about other countries govt; it is sometimes mentioned that they don't persecute magical beings but there seems no true info to counteract the horrid misinformations of the British magical Ministry.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - cztelnik on June 29, 2015
    There's a lot of life trueism in this chapter. The interactions are interesting, Severus is incredible - it is extremely difficult to switch between lover and caretaker roles; although his past and their previous relationship help a lot. I like your Ron too. Harry's PTSD makes sense but that doesn't make it easy to deal with.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - cztelnik on June 29, 2015
    Perhaps the chapters were not all properly posted, since I can't recall all of this. Enjoying the story very much and glad for a chance to reread it.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - cztelnik on June 28, 2015
    Excellent chapter, even better the second time around. Forgot about Dracoina, or Phoenix I suppose, crazy Lucius and the whole Narcissa being such a bad mom.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - cztelnik on June 28, 2015
    I'm certain I've read this before but it is even better this time around. There is a reasonable recovery time and method for Harry and woot! after reading your Mauraders prequel I'm thrilled to find a Harry∆Severus fic follows. I admire your ability to write Lucius and Draco in very different lights yet still believable.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kitty5tatts on June 24, 2015
    OMG! Could not stop long enough to review till I reached "the end". This story is fantastic! Very well written with a little bit of everything it needs. PLEASE tell me it won't be abandoned!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lexi on June 20, 2015
    OMG OMG OMG. First off, thank you for continuing the story. I'm pretty sure at some point you said you wouldn't end up abandoning it, but waiting near close to a year for updates can be a little trying. However, that being said, the updates are well welcomed and always amazing. In fact I usually have to re-read the entire story before I can get to the updated chapter just so I can be sure of what happened. This chapter was definitely interesting. Especially with Harry going on his first vacation, lots of Miri firsts which are tooth achingly adorable. Of course I enjoy the little snippets of everyone else's lives in the large family that is the inhabitants of Grimmauld Place. The confrontation with Fenrir and Bellatrix was nice, though it adds questions that I will compile at the end since I have lots over the course of reading this story. Solarin being in the hospital definitely is a scary thing and since you put it on a cliff hanger I'm definitely going to be hoping that everything goes well. As always, you're writing is always a pleasure to read and it certainly brightened my week when I saw there was a new chapter. You always make it worth the wait.

    Now I have a couple of questions that I've come up with throughout the course of re-reading the story. I'm simply keeping to questions that I feel like haven't been explained exactly. I have a few more than the ones listed, but I know those will more than likely be explained later as they are central questions to the plot or you set events up to be then cleared in the coming chapters.

    1. Why hasn't anyone thought to ask Minister Fudge, though idiotic he may be, change the laws on hermaphrodites? I mean the Augur Laws had to have been just as old as the hermaphrodite ones? After Harry's terrible experience, why hasn't anyone thought for them to be changed?
    2. How is it that the Aurors weren't able to capture Bellatrix and Fenrir when they attacked Sirius, Remus and Solarin? I mean Moody was there. And how can Lucius continuously keep appearing and then not get caught?
    3. How are both Dorian and Daven magical whilst there parents aren't? And how was Sophia able to tell with Daven when the baby couldn't show any sign of magic?

    You don't have to answer any questions if you feel they will be explained in future chapters. Keep up the amazing work.

    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!