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Reviews for Rivalry

By : starstruck86
  • From ANON - kai on November 26, 2009
    hehehehe, i knew he'd be late but Severus meeting Ron @ the Burrow instead was awesome. Their first time in Ron's room, nice! And also HOT! Also after, with the talk about being rivals about their quidditch team was awesome, had me giggling. I loved it & also that little snippet at the end of their lives together was lovely & nice touch with the custard. It started with custard & it ends with custard, great job.

    I will be waiting for your next Snape/Rone fic! I look forward to it. ^_^

    HAPPY TURKEY DAY!!
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  • From LadyZombie on November 24, 2009
    sigh. At least they're getting closer. I'm evil. I was hoping Severus would press Ron about what he was doing in his quarters that night and Ron would have to tell him about his toy. That would have been funny.

    You'll like this, I had on some Dropkick Murphys while I was reading this. During the pub scene, guess what song happened to be playing. I lie not but it was 'Kiss me, I'm shitfaced.'


    I thought it was hilariously appropriate.
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  • From ANON - kai on November 24, 2009
    i loved that they were set up with each other on the blind date. awesomeness! i loved it. and that that ultimatum that ron gave, nice. I like it, i wonder, is he going to make it by 9 or not. ^_^ the suspense, i can't wait. update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2009
    so close, sooooooooo close....

    Geez woman!!!

    Loved the bits with Sprout and the whole bubble bath thing, made me crack up...

    How much longer must I suffer :P
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  • From tambrathegreat on November 23, 2009
    It seems like everything worked out in the end, but I'm sure Pomona will have to pay with more than a check. I'm glad Ron didn't jump at the chance to sleep with Snape. The man needs to be reminded how very much he hurt Ron. Hopefully, Severus will be there at six in the morning and there will be fantastic pre-holiday sex.

    I really enjoyed the chapter and look forward to more.


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  • From HarryVik on November 22, 2009
    so know Ron knows that Sev is interested, Sev knows Ron is interested. SO why in the world are they still not getting into action. Thickheaded men, hopefully that changes soon.

    Good chapter can barely wait for the next update.
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  • From talley on November 22, 2009
    That was full of squee! Yet frustrating. These two have got to get together. lol I liked the Italian and pink robes and the little pinch. The glimpse of his former lover. And a very nice and subtle reminding of who Ron is, in his mind, when his mother mentioned they sometimes wondered that he didn't believe them when they said they loved him. ***my heart ached a bit there*** Now Ron's off with George. Will these two ever get together? Or more importantly when????
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  • From ANON - kai on November 21, 2009
    nice title! everyone does want ron!! ^_^ yay! i liked that the first one to hit on ron was the ex but he went away when he wasn't wanted. then the italian, nice. XD

    also, was that McGonagle that found them or someone else. but either way, awesome!! I see matchmaking & locking them in rooms or something happening here. HAHAHAHA...

    please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on November 20, 2009
    At this point I'm not sure who is more frustrated with Sev, Ron or me...lol...

    You are killing me here but...what a way to go

    Can't wait for the coming explosion!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Zombie on November 20, 2009
    Aarh! These two...I tell ya. Sooo infuriating! I feel like shouting "Just fucking fuck already. You know you want to."

    LOL @ sneaky peaky Sprout and petulant Snape changing the Italian's robes pink. How do you come up with this stuff?

    Looking forward to more.
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  • From tambrathegreat on November 20, 2009
    Da-da-da dun. I have a feeling Severus and Ron are going to be given helping hands in getting them together, whether they want them or not. Loved the pink robes of the Italian, and I loved Severus' jealousy over so many of the situations.

    I'm glad he finally got a clue that Ron is interested. For heaven's sake, the man was a spy, how could he miss the signs? But we all know that he would never think that Ron is interested in him because he has such a poor self-image. Ron needs to do something about that too.

    I was so happy to see the new chappie, but am still hungry for more. (I've been so hungry for more that I'm re-reading Seraphim. I still just love that story.)

    Thanks for the update, and I hope things are going well. Things are fine here with the hubby and all, so it's all good.

    T
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  • From HarryVik on November 14, 2009
    I can't wait for next chapter. I love your Snape/Ron fanfic, i am going to look at your livejournal today. Keep up your work and i hope to read more soon. Thank you and good luck.

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  • From talley on November 13, 2009
    I enjoyed reading the ball and their preparations for it. Laughed at drunk Harry. Enjoyed those two finally getting together. Hurt to think of Fred and George. Hate how Snape doesn't stop to consider how his actions look. Poor Ron feeling all rejected. Why is that boy alone? Poor thing.
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  • From ANON - kai on November 13, 2009
    oh no!! misunderstandings all around!
    but that was hot before it went all bad!!

    i see something happening with that italian, hmmm....
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on November 12, 2009
    I don't know who I want to beat more up side the head, Severus for being such a gloomy, the glass is half empty kind of guy or Ron, for being such a hot head and not being able to express himself kind of guy :P

    I love these two so much!!!! They give me the giddies!!!!!
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