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Reviews for Time Alone With Herself

By : BeefJerkyYo
  • From Valehtelija on December 03, 2013
    I just... what... I. Fuck it. This is retarded. Utterly retarded. No one could be that fucking accepting of being roped into a marriage due to a pregnancy they didn't even cause. No one, not even Harry Saint Potter. Just fuck it. Why didn't she abort? It's not like that isn't an option.
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  • From ANON - Vaobry on April 17, 2013
    Is it just me or is Hermione completely unlikable in this fic?
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  • From sleepyheadless on August 17, 2010
    Great chapter.
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  • From sleepyheadless on July 12, 2010
    Another great chapter.
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  • From pfeil on July 11, 2010
    Well done, Hermione!
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  • From on July 09, 2010
    this is pretty fucked up
    so naturally...
    i like it ;)
    but as for the mistakes thats why the all it fan fiction i guess, haha
    im quite excited to read more actually
    i hope the other chapters will be as scintillating as the previous ;)
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  • From sleepyheadless on June 28, 2010
    another great chapter.

    I"m looking forward to the next update.
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  • From sleepyheadless on June 12, 2010
    Well I think you should leave it here if it is still primarily Harry/Hermione.
    Also I wounder if Hermione will tell harry about this Ginny thing later.
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  • From Thisismyname on June 03, 2010
    I like this fic. I really hope you don't have Ginny getting preggers from this chapter. Have her fall down some stairs and break her neck or something.
    How about having Harry and Hermione play with some Polyjuice together. They could swap rolls, both be Harry and both be Hermione. You had Hermione seeming to enjoy her time as Harry up until the point she came, I think she would enjoy it all if she was doing it with Harry.
    Anyway, nice fic.
    Cya!
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  • From pfeil on April 24, 2010
    I hope Harry disabuses Hermione of the notion that he and Ginny are "perfect for each other".

    Not to mention, Hermione, that when someone tries to blackmail you, it's time to whip out the ol' Obliviate spell. Just tell the bitch she got too drunk and that's why she doesn't remember the end.

    Though it might be fun for Hermione to do Ginny while Polyjuiced as Harry, so long as she obliviates Ginny afterwards. Please don't let Ron get anywhere near an under-clothed Hermione, though.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2010
    Ooo, adding Ginny sounds like fun! But preferably as a threesome, rather than some one-off Boy-Who-Lived shag. Oh, maybe if Ginny decides she likes eating out Hermione while Harry pounds her hard, maybe Hermione could show off her polyjuice kinks and then she could become Harry too, and both could shag her and then Ginny would get two Harrys! LOL
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  • From sleepyheadless on April 21, 2010
    it was great.
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  • From belikewater on April 20, 2010
    *grumbles* I hadda sign up for an account so I could review this.

    Anyway, I enjoy the story itself, however, your time line is /really/ confusing. Time turner happens in third year, Hermione gets pregnant, and they leave, by the time they have the baby, Hermione is 15 at the oldest (because she's nearly a year older than Harry), a year later Hermione's hit 17 (in your story), and able to cast magic, what? And then she makes mention of the time turners being destroyed when Voldemort came back, I can only assume this refers to the Department of Mysteries incident... which wouldn't have happened if Harry and Hermione left school at the end of third year.

    Timeline out of the way, I do have a question. I'm assuming that at some point Harry will be 'Hermione' and Hermione will be 'Harry', and they'll have sex... do you think it's possible for a polyjuiced male to get pregnant? And if so, would it be possible to "carry over", if you will? I mean, the juice only lasts for an hour, unless you take it repeatedly (a la Moody!Crouch), so it's not like you'd know about the embryo at all. So I suupose it's something of a nonsense question. But it's sat in my mind since the mention of polyjuicing Harry/Hermione to reverse their roles. I mean, what if the magic sensed the beginning of life, and 'it' stopped Harry from turning back? Anyway, enough rambling on my part.

    I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From WhiteWhiskey on April 16, 2010
    Pretty good, but while Hermione's birthday is indeed September 19, she is the older of the couple, being born almost a year before Harry. If she were a month or two older, she'd have been a second year when Harry started.
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  • From sleepyheadless on April 16, 2010
    it was great.

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