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Reviews for Onward into the Breach

By : QueenB
  • From disgruntledfairy on July 06, 2012
    Your story is beautiful, clever, exciting and moving. I loved every word you wrote. Thank you for writing such an amazing story. Best of luck to you in all of your future writing endeavors!
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  • From CodyMThomas on July 01, 2010
    I wonder what happened to the other Severus, did he switch places too? and what of AU Severus' Harry? I really feel rather bad for him, I hope they also found a way to be happy. and I definitely many things you had happen should have happened in the series. This was a really great story, well worth staying up for! thanks for the lovely, I'm sure to have good dreams tonight! *reluctantly shuffles off to bed due to ungodly wake up times in the morning.*
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  • From Darkless on May 07, 2010
    Whew! A canon story with a unique twist. I love finding original ideas in popular fanbased fiction. Well written and thought out. And even though it was Snape, you made him believably sweet with his feelings and dealings with Harry. Who wouldn't fall for that. Especially if he's got Rickman's voice. *shudder* Excellent story.
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  • From on January 17, 2010
    Wow, exciting!
    I really loved the premises of this story. Will read 'When Fate Steps In' now, I suppose - gotta know what sparked all this. ^^
    The interaction between this other Severus and Harry was fun to watch. I thought the scenes taken from canon were a little to close to the original to be truly exciting, but the little changes - like Severus kissing Harry right before the battle of Hogwarts - were pretty cool. ^^
    - k.
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  • From iluvmysato on January 11, 2010
    Hi,

    My email is Kahlan1986@yahoo.com (I luv the show Legend of the Seeker)

    I probably won't be able to check back until the weekend due to computer access problems.


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  • From koki on January 09, 2010
    Brilliant, Amazing, Loved It!!!
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  • From HeartStar on January 09, 2010
    I love this story so much. I hadn't read the companion story yet but now I will is that one completw as well? Lara_Wakim@yahoo.com
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  • From KillingProphet on December 04, 2009
    Again woman! AGAIN? I seriously have to go to bed I'm sitting here reading and all the sudden I wake up because my head just fell forward. Then I'm like one more chapter and of course I sit and read the whole damned thing. Nevermind the fact it's now 330 am and I have to wake up at 640am to take a friend to school. Thank you very much for not allowing me to have ANY sleep!!
    But also thank you for writing such a wonderful plot. Although I can't help but wonder what happened to the other Snape and Harry?
    I'll read your third story tomorrow probably.
    Thanks again,
    KP
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  • From mrequecky on December 03, 2009
    Really enjoyed!
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