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Reviews for Sympathy for the Predators

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From morningstorm70 on December 30, 2015
    R u going to add to this story?
    I hope u fo
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  • From Severus1snape on December 30, 2015
    This was your first attempt with this pairing? That
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  • From Severus1snape on December 29, 2015
    Now, you know that I am reading through all your stuff, And I know I am not the greatest reviewer, but I still leave a little, most times only a few words to tell you that I read and enjoyed it or not. While others write long ones, well, English is not my language so it might come easier to them. But I offen go back and read them again though.
    However, I feel I MUST write this to you now.
    Having finished chapter 3 just now:


    "Perhaps Potter is not prey after all, to be eaten and then discarded.



    Perhaps he is a hunter who can run beside me."


    This line, is the best you have ever written in my oppinion!
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  • From ANON - cztelnik on July 20, 2015
    This is entertaining. Fiction reading can be a form of people watching if the authors write that way. I've always liked cartoons by Johnny Hart and stories by Saki and Kipling even before I understood them deeply. Harry's direct actions to ask Lucius directly why he donated was as entertaining as Hatful of Sky when Tiffany considered how much simpler it would be if people simply asked if someone was evil in the beginning, to see if they'd reply honestly.
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  • From ANON - cztelnik on July 20, 2015
    Lucius likely isn't aware of the 'muggle' proverb curiosity killed the cat... But he might approve of its sentiments.
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  • From ANON - cztelnik on July 20, 2015
    At least Harry will not despise Lucius for his actions. Harry will expect a Malfoy to behave in self-serving, predatorial ways. He may not like it but i think he will accept the inevitability of it and acceptance is two steps towards love.
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  • From ANON - cztelnik on July 20, 2015
    So Lucius is learning about Harry and Draco is jealous and can't understand. I really like your OC's. Looking forward to the chase when Harry learns about it.
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  • From ANON - cztelnik on July 20, 2015
    As always your story is written with precise beauty. Too bad it is yet unfinished but there are ten chapters to explore. It seems the last sentence was to start the progression for Harry from despising to becoming intrigued by Lucius, as his movements were unexpected - despite Harry's subsequent rationalization.
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  • From BAFan on September 17, 2014
    Ch. 10

    It's been awhile since I last read this, but IMO it's one of your most intriguing stories, unlike any of your others that come to mind. I know you said in your profile that you were stalled on it due to plot and tone problems, but do you think you'll ever finish it?
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  • From hellangelhellina on January 09, 2011
    i love the way thi story i writen a well a the story itself. it i a very intereting story and it o elicate done. i love how each chapter begain with a predator. i love lucius so much in this story, and harry is awome. i personally think draco needs a wipin or a spakn wich ever lucius perfer. anyway update soon.
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  • From JesterJester on January 02, 2011
    *-* I loooved it! I could not stop reading and I must say I love the pace in wich the story unfolds, the way Lucius and Harry are acting and well ... the whole plot. I hope you will continou this story soon for I cant wait how the two of them will throw the ministry off his guard. Thank you for sharing you story and uploading
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  • From ANON - purple-er on December 29, 2010
    yay!! another chapter!! waiting for the chapter almost makes the read more pleasant :P
    cheers
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  • From AlterEquis on December 25, 2010
    Hi,

    I recently found the brilliant library that is your collection of writings.

    This piece particularly captured me and I honestly hope that you will be continuing.

    Alter Equis
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  • From ANON - PImpshit on August 11, 2010
    PLZZ update!!! i ADORE this story and a lot of you other ones but...well i just REALLY love this one!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 05, 2010
    Chapter 9 please!!!
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