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Reviews for Losing No More Time

By : TimeLoop
  • From ANON - Meesh's Wand on October 04, 2016

    Please finish this.  I've been digging through the far back regions of Hermione stories and this one is good.  Honestly, I just like the idea of a more complete ending.


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  • From RedsAttic on December 09, 2010
    EXCELLENT!!!!!

    I look forward to future chapters.....
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  • From Glorioux on September 27, 2010
    I surely hope you come back and finish it pls do so. A very god story
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  • From neela1954 on July 09, 2010
    I'm enjoying this story. I hope you update soon. The idea
    not one that I have seen before. You have done well.
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  • From Arodri59 on June 23, 2010
    I loved it!
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  • From voraciousreader on June 18, 2010
    Time fics can be very confusing--they seem to provoke a convoluted verb tense no matter what you do! Nicely done; I had to laugh at the idea of Draco bursting in and begging her to go back so he can be born.
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  • From angelnomiko on June 16, 2010
    aww poor lucius... please please more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From dragongirl on June 15, 2010
    The critics are some fair and so simply blah! Most of the time we need them to grow and learn, but we also learn how to discard some of them because they have not value or are simply a waste of our time. As your writting is concern. This is a different aspect that you are exploring so I encourge you to follow your outline and your heart.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 15, 2010
    Hello. I apologize for not reviewing more regularly, but I have been reading and enjoying this story, even if I do still have loads of questions. I hope my vote will count when I say please don't scrap this completely. I think with a bit of tweaking and objective-setting, you could easily go back and just edit what you have. The premise is unique and the characters well-defined. Now, we just need to know a bit more about why he was sent forward by Severus and Draco; and what they have to gain from all of this. I was completely with you until all of a sudden he needed to be brought back so that Draco could be born. Then, why send him forward in the first place? I am sure Severus had something to do with it; something about helping Lucius learn to be a better person, perhaps? So, in closure, please don't toss it out, as I truly like it and simply want to know more about them and where you're going with it. I love your writing style and flow, so keep up the good work, okay? Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From angelnomiko on June 13, 2010
    that was great... please please update soon i would love to read more.. later for now

    angel
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  • From margaritama on June 12, 2010
    I read your AN and as for scratching the story well, that's up to you. From a reader's vantage, I'm still completely confused as to what's going on. I have no clue why he's been dragged forward, why Hermione should go back, how Draco will be borne. Perhaps, you need to plot out and outline your chapters? Maybe go back and edit a bit what you wrote. The basic premise is interesting but what's the reason for being? Hence the plot? That's what's missing for me, personally. You write concisely and clearly but you need to just sit and think about where you want the characters to go and what's linking them together. I dare say, you know what it is but its not coming across to this reader, I'm sorry. Time travel stories are tough, hence why I don't touch them - I completely confuse myself, so kudos for going down that road. I think may be just go back and re-think the story a touch or edit it, rather than scrapping a good outline. I feel compelled to say this is not a flame but constructive criticism you requested in your note. Good luck. I'll look for more of your work. :-)
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  • From LaBibliographe on June 10, 2010

    Chapter 8: Ooooh, OMG, please don
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  • From dragongirl on June 08, 2010
    I like this story but if you think that starting over will make it better........ go for it!!!!!! We will be here to read and review........... Good Luck!
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  • From dracoschick007 on June 07, 2010
    I think I'm really starting to like this. Looking forward to another chapter!!!
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  • From voraciousreader on June 07, 2010
    The sequences seemed a little choppy, but as you said, you are under a great deal of pressure right now. I was glad to see the update, even if you are planning to redo the entire thing, although I'm not sure why you would. Take a deep breath, get real life taken care of. Most readers will still be around someplace when you get back. Good luck with your submission. (That really came out a lot different than it sounded in my head. Sorry)
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