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Reviews for Atlantis - An Adventure

By : TheLadyMiya
  • From nonentity on June 23, 2010
    Aluga's back story is sad and all, but I still don't like her or feel the least bit sympathetic for her. Her misadventures in WWW and with Mad-Eye Moody amused me.

    I'm wondering if Voldie's actually telling the truth about Calvin's death being an accident. Voldy's priorities might be in the wrong place, but he actually seems to be developing feelings of guilt etc.
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  • From mrequecky on June 23, 2010
    Yay, great updates!
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  • From magentasouth on June 23, 2010
    hurrah!! More!!
    Once again - I love your writing style. It draws one in. This story is very unique and memorable. Its sad that there arent that many chapters to go, as you say - but I suppose thats the way of all things in life. It can't go on forever. I hope you'll come up with something even more entrancing after you finish with this. In the meantime however - I cant wait till the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - soniab on June 20, 2010
    Excellent. Things are really moving along. I wonder if Hermione will move in with Voldemort when she finishes her schooling?

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From QueenRuby on June 20, 2010
    Okay for your question (and I'm not an expert) the hormons only last one or two months useually, but when you add in losing Remus, the stress she has to be feeling between her loyalty to Harry and her love of Voldy and her NEWTS she could be setting her self up for one hell of a break down or blow up. As for me bringing up Bella again I love confertations between her and Hermione. I'm also wanting to see what has happened to the whole Atlantis thing. Wasn't Agul(sp) going to hunt them down? How would Voldy handle Hermione getting attacked? By eaither the Atlantis people or by his own death eaters? Or maybe someone in the order attacks her? Ron would be a good canadate he has problems with his temper. (and I don't like him) What is Harry doing now that there is no more Horxrue(sp)? Can him and Voldamort find comen ground since they both love Hermione though in diffrent ways? And is Ginny really that clueless? All questions To keep in mind while writing. If I were to write a one shot based on your background for Voldamort and Bella with her and Hermione facing off could I post it? I know it dosen't fit into your story line but I think it would be funny.
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  • From nonentity on June 19, 2010
    Glad to see Hermione's still defending the house elves! Voldemort's comment about asking Hermione's parents was certainly unexpected, but made sense. Hermione being huffy around a dangerous, dangerous wizard is a hoot. Lucius's whining to Voldemort is amusing; I would have expected him to save face by not admitting what happened. I guess he's more like Draco than one would hope.
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  • From QueenRuby on June 18, 2010
    Ohh thanks for Reviewing one of my stories. I swear I'm going to write something new soon. Anyhow love the chapter though slightly confused as the whole stomach thing while sweet is something men do when their wife and or girlfreind is prego (to tired to type the correct word). Trust me my ex got yelled at and told I wasn't a damn jennie bottle to stop rubbing me. I was very hormonal and bed tempered during my pregnacy. Maybe deep down in side he dose secretly want kids he just has to deal with his own issues first. Also (and I hope I'm not guessing plot again) Lossing a baby is hard on a woman even if she didn't want the child. Has to do with Hormons. Your body starts producing them as soon as you concive then to lose the child is a sudden stop of said hormons. in other words you lose your high. Depression and or anger can resault. Not in all woman just most so you can go eaither way though I think you could have fun with it. I still want to see Bella's reaction to how Voldy is treating Hermione. Bella: Why is he rubbing the mudblood's tummy. He kild our child then comforts her when she lose theirs as if he actually wanted that filth to carrie his heir!!!! Voldy: Curico. Bella: AHHHHHHHHHHHHH (Okay I'm done now no more reviewing at 2 am it dose weird things to them.)
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  • From magentasouth on June 17, 2010
    Awesome story! I hope it continues..
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  • From joeshmo on June 15, 2010
    aww!! I haven't had time to read it what seems like forever but I was super happy to be able to read three amazing new chapters! I love it as always and hope they work out their differences and stuff!! Can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - nonentity on June 14, 2010
    Poor Hermione--completely bored by school! What has the world come to? Lord Voldemort and his emotions are rather entertaining. Talk of children already? I like the bit about Ginny and Hermione bonding over Ginny's writing. I guess Voldie's lack of full control over his cronies and the deatheaters still chasing after the Order will be the next big plot point?
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  • From QueenRuby on June 12, 2010
    Awww Voldy needs to see the plus side to children exspically his and Hermione's. One they would be wickedly smart and powerful. They would make perfect genrals and other trusted officals and help him rule. Hermione Could kick any Death eaters ass and a hormoanal preganate Hermione would have them all cowering in fear at her feet. But really in all honstey I just want to see the look on Bellatrix face when she realizes that she wasn't allowed to carrie the Dark Lords heir but Potter's Mudblood was. That would be priceless.
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  • From mrequecky on June 12, 2010
    Great updates!
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  • From ANON - soniab on June 11, 2010
    Oh no. So LV let HG go and now she is returning to Hogwarts to continue her education. Hmmm, I wonder what you have planned for her. And how will HP defeat LV? Or perhaps he will not :)

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From QueenRuby on June 09, 2010
    You know besides it being a little icky there is a reason most women wont have sex during their Period. You can get pregnant exspically the last days of it. That being said can I once again say how much I want little Voldies running around?
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  • From nonentity on May 27, 2010
    very juicy. I totally wasn't expecting you to kill off Remus. I would wonder if they managed to cure his werewolfism, but then he wouldn't have turned into a wolf in the first place. I don't find Aluga terribly interesting--maybe more little tidbits about her should be inserted? I thought Lucius would be waiting at the base, but he must have been sent off earlier. Damn you, I have to go reread! ;-)
    I actually don't find Riddle, Snape, or Hermione to be OOC. I like how nice Snape's been so far, without him being all mushy and tender.
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