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Reviews for The Day I Did Snape-Complete!

By : Koolgirl18
  • From Padfootsgrl on May 10, 2010
    Ginny needs to be with both of them!!!! :) and very good chapter.
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  • From on May 10, 2010
    Let Ginny have both men! Please please please I'm on my belly begging!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Elphaba on May 03, 2010
    Holy hell that was HOT and ballsy!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 01, 2010
    i have to say i love this so much ( it just makes me all worme inside when i read this) i dont go for the stories with long ch but this one was well worth it, i get all gitty when i see you have put up a new chapter it like makes my week ... keep it up it can only get better
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  • From Padfootsgrl on April 27, 2010
    goodbye peter! lol.
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  • From goldhorse on April 27, 2010
    Ew. Voldy likes sloppy seconds.. *gag*

    In other news, I love that Ginny was devious enough to use her brain AND her magic to outwit that snakey old bastard. Can't wait to see how Dumbledore reacts to Ms. Adams again. *wink wink*
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  • From Kayrox133 on April 27, 2010
    Shame on me for not reviewing the last two chapters. So much stuff is going on! Ginny' s manipulation of Voldemort was great. Maybe Ms. Adams will smack Dumbledore upside the head for using everyone else but unwilling to make the sacrifices himself by trusting in Serena. If he doesn't recognize that, it could be a weakness to be exploited. Until next time!
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  • From SmutReader on April 27, 2010
    You're right Ginny does have balls, and you write her so well. Anyways, the sex scenes are, as always totally amazing. Please keep writing, it's getting really good now.
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  • From CrazyPedantic on April 23, 2010
    Go the girl power! Dumbledore is being very ridiculous. It's like he doesn't care about Remus' mental state, doing whatever he has to in order to get the werewolves on side. Dumbledore has manipulated everyone else; Ginny, Harry, Snape, Remus. It's a little ridiculous that he won't allow his own daughter to fight in the manner she wants to and especially since it was her suggestion.

    Loved how you made Ginny tell Snape what for. It's not right to expect her to be subservient especially since she's such a strong person herself. Perhaps Snape will realise that, yeah he apologised but Ginny was right to say that just saying sorry isn't enough.

    Looking forward to the next installment
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  • From on April 22, 2010
    Okay, I really don't want to read about Ginny's sex with voldemort, so please feel free to no go into detail there! However as I have said before if Ginny was to end up with Lucius instead that would be prefectly fine with me! Don't get me wrong I love Severus, but Lucius is my personal fav!
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  • From on April 12, 2010
    Your so kind an early update! I like I like it!
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  • From Elphaba on April 12, 2010
    Awesome chappy! Loved Remus and Serena! And Dumbles reaction!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 09, 2010
    so i only just started reading this a few days ago , and i f-ing love it i'm all love for the S/G stories Chapter 10 made me cry a little... keep up the great work
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  • From Kayrox133 on April 07, 2010
    That is a strong oath from Serena to Remus. Has she been looking for a werewolf clan or maybe some extra protection? I can see some protection come out of this.
    In the meantime, I hope Snape's compassion starts to come out. I hope you give us the scene in which he kills, seriously maims, hideously disfigures or whichever, his brother. Can you imagine if he gives those memories as a gift to Ginny? lol. "Here you go. It's the gift that keeps on giving!"
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  • From on April 06, 2010
    There was so much that I loved about this story, right from the very beginning. I'm not a big Snape/Ginny fan (I think Hermione will always be my favorite for him), but the summary sounded interesting, so I decided to give it a go. I'm so glad that I did. I'm not going to lie and say that this story was flawless and perfect, but I will say that the good definitely outweighed the bad! The smut has been fabulous - seriously, very hot! Makes me wish my husband wasn't halfway around the world right now! Also, because I've read all 16 chapters in one go, it was really obvious to see how you've grown as a writer since the first chapter. I had so many nitpicks in the first chapter, but in almost every chapter since, I've seen an improvement. I had a few I meant to mention, but because I didn't make a note of them, I can't remember all of them. I do remember this one though: It's Remus, not Remes. I was also a little confused about why you changed Luna's history, because her mom died when she was 8 or 9, and that's why she was able to see the thestrals in OotP. Not a big deal, really, I was just wondering if there was a greater reasoning behind it.

    I like that you've kept Sirius alive and have him and Hermione in a relationship. Dumbledore having a love child is very squick to me, but so long as you don't have him starring in a smut scene, I think we're okay lol... Lucius is a great lover for Ginny, but I won't deny that I'd really hoped her and Draco would have a thing. Only, I think Draco would probably be more competition for Severus than Lucius is. Oh, in an earlier chapter you asked if readers thought you'd glorified the initiation rape, and I thought I would share my thoughts on it: You did not. For one, it wasn't entirely rape, because Ginny went there of her own free will and allowed it to happen to her knowing full well what was going to happen. Was it wrong? Was it horrible? Yes. But was it true rape? No, it was definitely a gray area. (Please don't misinterpret me, I'm definitely not saying it was consensual!)

    Anyway, one of my trademarks is giving really long reviews - I hope you don't mind! I'm really looking forward to more of this story! Oh, and I would be delighted to be a beta for you, if you'd like. I don't usually read here because I prefer moderated sites, but I really don't want to lose track of this story. So, please, give me an email sometime, it's delayedpoet at gmail dot com :)
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