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Reviews for Breaking Point

By : NihilEtNemo
  • From MacPhisto on January 18, 2011
    please update soon
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  • From nitesfool on February 09, 2010
    ok.... ummm... it's time for u to continue now.
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  • From jessirose85 on January 24, 2010
    I hope Narcissa is punished xxx

    Draco needs severe counselling and Lucius needs to be there for his son xxx

    Liking this story though
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  • From SalonKitty on January 23, 2010
    This is very intriguing. I like the idea you are exploring here. Certainly, a case could be made that something darker lurked in Narcissa's attachment to her son, and this is a twisted pairing that is never really looked at. You're making Draco sympathetic to me, which I'm not used to, but I find fascinating.

    Now, using Lucius' pov is ideal, but....I find your descriptions of his inner turmoil almost too analytical, as if I'm reading criteria out of the DSM-IV. Some of his musings strike me as too unrealistic. I don't think he could have processed this much so quickly. And if Lucius really loved Narcissa and not just the idea of her, well, then I would think his feelings would be much more complicated in this matter and he wouldn't immediately fall 'out of love' with her in one second. Surely, he would try to rationalize it in some way? I'm inclined to think his first reaction would be to blame his son, first.

    I'll be interested to see how you show Draco's take on this.
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