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Reviews for Merciless Flirt

By : CryingCinderella
  • From ANON - SunsStorm on March 06, 2010
    Love this story. It's well written and entertaining.... can't wait until Chapter 11 is posted.
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  • From Sparkykiki on March 06, 2010
    Another good chapter. Somehow I think Charlie is going to end up in Hogsmeade. There is a way to get around the rules where she can't have visitors! Just a short trip to Hogsmeade. :p
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  • From blondpierogi on March 03, 2010
    whoa whoa.. what is going on?!?!?!?! Why did Charlie get rid of the store and everything???/ Is everything going to be ok?
    But wait, i smell a twist coming...LOL... is he going to Hogwarts w/ Hermione and become a teacher? or is he running away.
    OOh i cannot wait to read more. I am hoping for the first option and not the other.
    Keep up the GREAT work!!
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  • From beautifullysevere on March 03, 2010
    Argh, talk about a cliffie...Poor Hermione. I do hop that this isn't go to end like she thinks it will. And please be kind and update quickly. I'm dying to know what happens...
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  • From Daye on March 03, 2010
    Oh no, poor Hermione! Drama Times! What can Charlie be up to?
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  • From ANON - doodle on February 20, 2010
    Great story line. I truly enjoy Charlie and Hermione together. I like the build up to admitting their mutual attraction. I wonder how they are going to share the new realtionship with everyone. I look forward to an update
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  • From Kayrox133 on February 20, 2010
    How funny to get almost interrupted by Molly! I like how you played their reactions to Ginny and Molly's questioning. Wonder how long it takes someone to figure it out or would it be that much of a shocker that they just can't see it. Lol
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  • From blondpierogi on February 19, 2010
    OOOH nice!!!! wow Molly is super nosy.. lol
    cannot wait to read more!
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  • From Daye on February 19, 2010
    Yay! You survived the snow storms!

    Sadly, I can't think of much to say; beyond - I'm still reading, still liking it. I'm thinking the actual sex scenes wander a little to the poetic to my taste but that's just a matter of style.

    I will note that British slang for balls is bollocks not bullocks which are male cows.
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  • From Sparkykiki on February 18, 2010
    Another fab chapter, but one question. If Hermione had cast a Silencing charm before they got down to business and I am assuming that Charlie wore her out enough that she probably forgot to lift it, then how was Molly able to hear their response? And not hear the wonderful time they had when they awoke?

    Other than that. It was fab and I'm really looking forward to whether Ginny or Molly have figured it out yet!
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  • From blondpierogi on February 12, 2010
    Awwies I hated this snow storm that we had. I live in NJ about 15minutes from Manhattan. and we had at least a foot of snow on Wednesday. My car was stuck and it was horrible. What state are you from? I am glad that you are ok.

    btw...I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! keep up the GREAT work!!!
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  • From Sparkykiki on February 11, 2010
    So, I would like to say....Halle-freakin'-lujah!!!!! It's about time, but seriously, prune and tamale casserole??? EW! It was definitely worth the wait and the interruptions, so great job. I really need to find me a Charlie. There's just something about those rough and tumble earthy men with a brain. I love the fact that you actually made up spells. The idea of Hermione modifying them is brillant and so Hermione-like.

    I do thank you for your review of We'll Always have Paris! As soon as I get a moment that I'm not completely exhausted (working tons of overtime right now), I will make the corrections to her outfit, but honestly it'll probably this weekend at the earliest. I promise that I'm not going to leave it there (I am working on a sequel called Roman Holiday). If you have a fanfiction acct, you can PM me there. I'd love to here your feedback on the grammatical errors since both of my betas have been buried under a bunch of work!

    Can't wait for the next chapter of this!!! :D

    The Sexy Muggle Librarian
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  • From Kayrox133 on February 07, 2010
    Yes! It finally happened! Despite the bathroom emergency(!), a dip in the pond, and a freakin proposal. Thank you for making me laugh and keeping me entertained.
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  • From blondpierogi on February 07, 2010
    wow what a great chapter!!! Great job!!
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  • From Tanya on February 07, 2010
    Wow :D smutty good times lol
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