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Reviews for Too Much of A Good Thing

By : KohakuShadow
  • From EnchanteNoir on February 15, 2010
    In all honesty... I say briefs, and I'll tell you why. We are talking about a man who all but exudes sex, grace, power, and dominance. He's the epitome of sexy, breathtaking, and with fluid motion that just says "I'm a man who either wears briefs or nothing at all" I just honestly can't see him as a boxer type of man. I see him more in briefs that are form hugging and made of expensive materials... the one thing he splurges on in a moment of weakness.

    Pairings: Severus/Harry (Yes I am that obsessed), and allow me to beg now for a story:

    Submissive Sev... something about this... *Shivers* And it's not written enough! I long to see Severus let loose... much like in your fic. Size Whore... needy... and completely and utterly submissive. I have an idea I'd like to share with you... I plan to attempt to write this as a Harry/Sev idea one day with Harry being the submissive, but if you decide to choose my pairing then I would love to see it done as Severus being the submissive. A well kept secret... Severus is Putus Obsequium. Purely Submissive in other words. There are NONE left in the world as these types of Wizards/Witches tend to be badly abused by those who claim them and only ONE can claim them. The one meant to be their Master. When the inheritance strikes is up to you specially considering Sev is the Sub in this if you do it. They are extremely needy and obedient. They also have a um... heat I suppose you could say... which strikes at random and upon entering it they need the one who owns them immediately no matter where they are. The Dom will know ALWAYS. They are masochistic but not overly so, they enjoy being slammed against walls and taken roughly... etc etc. That's the idea, but anyway wanted to say awesome story and thank you in advance for offering something like this. I'll definitely be reading you whether you take up this idea or not!

    ~Lady Aqualyne
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  • From JanisJ on February 13, 2010
    Wow, cool and interesting new twist. Good job!

    Usually Snarry with top!Snape makes sense cuz of his domineering personality and Harry seems like he'd be inexperienced but in this case the top!Harry worked I think cuz he's somewhat experienced and incredibly eager (and courageous enough to pursue living out his fantasies). And Snape's desire to surrender/let go of control kinda makes sense too.

    And oh, man! This line had me laughing so hard and loud that my dogs were wondering if I was ok-- too fucking funny!: 'Really, it was a miracle he didn't have a pair of boners staring watery-eyed at Snape already.'

    OK, I'm going to email you my underwear and pairing vote.... Keep on writing, I like your style :)
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  • From ANON - Aroyo on February 13, 2010
    One of the seksiest snarries I've read in a while and Snape's the bottom! :( Life's just not fair sometimes. I managed to get through it though and surprisingly liked it. Thanks for posting.
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